Need critique for my drawing style :(

[Digiral 30]

Hey Guys

 

I just need critique for my drawing style

so here some examples of my drawing : 

 

Derpy Hooves

 

Zith Slighter (My OC ) 

Some pony request ...

Jetty Dash (My OC  too)

 

Pinkie pie with Random Known (My OC too)

 

And there's still many Art by me and comics too.... 

For Art or if you want to request : http://askdigiral.tumblr.com/

For Comics : http://digiralcomic.tumblr.com/

 

Oh yeah, can you all rate my Comics too

 

Thank for reading this post and thx for the rating and critique

[repsol rave 2,963]

i'm not really sure what to critisize on this. looks all very good to me.

the only thing that stood out a little to me was on your derpy hooves drawing. i kept feeling the ear needed some shading too.. but that's about all i got :/

[Digiral 30]

I have made some artwork with PaintoolSAI , It's so damn uncomfortable ..... and it's too complcated. 

Please critique my art with PaintoolSAI too :3

thx for crituque 

 

i'm not really sure what to critisize on this. looks all very good to me.

the only thing that stood out a little to me was on your derpy hooves drawing. i kept feeling the ear needed some shading too.. but that's about all i got :/

Okie dokie , noted that :3 Glad you like it :3

[Sickman 205]

Well, ANY artist would benefit from drawing some studies.
In your case, I would study horse anatomy. You know, look up pictures of them in different positions and such, and then just draw rough sketches to get a hang of how the physique works in various situations et cetera.
 

[Digiral 30]

Mmmm.... It's been a long time since I post in this tread .... 

Here some of my artwork... Did I make any progress? 

Anyway... check my deviant art :3 just visit my profile :3

Edited July 30, 2013 by Digiral

[RD120 0]

Aaight, looks like you need R.D. to give it to you straight. I got this.

 

Your proportions are WAY off, but they look like they've gotten better. Copying stuff from the show and just drawing pony stick figures helped me a lot. 

 

Second, they look really rigid. Like I said, do quickie gesture drawings, a lot of 'em. And I think you need to know your program (whatever it is) better, for that, find tutorials. I tried paint tool SAI, and I couldn't draw with it either.

 

Other than that... Your OC is cool, but I think the eyes and the cutie mark should match. 

[Digiral 30]

Aaight, looks like you need R.D. to give it to you straight. I got this.

 

Your proportions are WAY off, but they look like they've gotten better. Copying stuff from the show and just drawing pony stick figures helped me a lot. 

 

Second, they look really rigid. Like I said, do quickie gesture drawings, a lot of 'em. And I think you need to know your program (whatever it is) better, for that, find tutorials. I tried paint tool SAI, and I couldn't draw with it either.

 

Other than that... Your OC is cool, but I think the eyes and the cutie mark should match. 

Thanks for critque 

Yeah.... I guess my proportions are way off.... but , somepony told me , it's good to off from the show , because it's your own style....

and.... I drew with Sketchbook pro.... what did you mean by quickle gesture drawings ? 

 

and.... what OC you talked about ?

[Foxx 258]

Hello there! Foxx here to critique your work! (Um, that is if you don't mind...)Okay so first off, your linework is a little messy. I am not familiar with sketchbook, but I presume it has a stabilizer. If so, make use of it! In your attempts to make lifelike hair, you have approached it wrong. Take a look at this guide on the reddit drawing school Link. It basically explains how to indicate hair without drawing every strand. As said before the limbs do look very stiff. I see great potential in you though, so do not get discouraged! 

 

Stay Foxxy

 

~Foxx

Edited April 5, 2014 by Foxx

[SharpWit 2,472]

parts are slightly off but this style works great in comics or simple things

[Unikitty 1,211]

Pretty solid work right here. A few anatomy problems here and there, but I can see you're gaining a good grasp of angles(something I still have issues with). I would suggest staying away from harsh and fluro colours. Ponies are generally much more of a pastel tone, even when it comes to mane and tails. If you have to squint to see past the blinding light, it's too harsh of a colour. It's better to keep those colours for lighting and light-emitting objects.
Backgrounds are also a great thing to get into, as they can really make your pony pop out, or fit more into a scene.
Overall, very great job. Keep at it, I think you'll have things down pat in no time.

[Digiral 30]

Hello again... I'm back from super hiatus!

It has been 3 years since I started this topic.

So I'm here to show you the result of your critiques.

 

 

I got interested in traditional art and kinda left out the digital art. But I still use photoshop to fix some color.

 

Mostly, I colored my drawings with watercolors now.

 

And inks too.

 

Checked it all out on my deviantart page

 

Oh yeah, thank you guys, thanks for the critiques.

[FullmoonDagger 200]

Wow, this is absolutely stunning ! You made such progress, it's awesome

[KiraTakahashi 748]

I absolutely love it all. You can see how much your art style has improved.