my first drawling of my oc any comments on what to fix?

[Lightning_hooves 25]

this is my first hand drawling and coloring of my oc and the digital design of her but i would like your thoughts on my first drawling and some tips on how to make it better because id love to get good enough to draw ocs for others because i kinda enjoy drawling 

 

 

 

[akita-ken 581]

This topic appears to be an artwork created by the topic starter, and will therefore be moved to Fan Art. The Creative Resources board is for sharing tips and tricks, art resources, and requests.

Edited July 5, 2013 by akita-ken