slice of life Comic for my Character Nit Pick

[Nit Pick 247]

I need help with my comic that I'm working on.  It's my third draft.

 

I promise I won't be butt hurt if someone critiques it.  I just wanna know if I'm doing it right.

 

What I'm writing is what happened in between episodes with the main six and Nit Pick.

 

Nit Pick First Comic 3rd draft.pdf

 

Pretty please be honest! How am I going to learn if no one will tell me what I'm doing wrong?

[Forlong 1,725]

It's pretty good.  A nice mixture of canon and headcanon.  I think it's a bit odd that AJ and Dash don't even have a rough idea of how their own government is structured; but that does fit with their characters (more so with Dash than AJ).

[Nit Pick 247]

It's pretty good.  A nice mixture of canon and headcanon.  I think it's a bit odd that AJ and Dash don't even have a rough idea of how their own government is structured; but that does fit with their characters (more so with Dash than AJ).

 

It's exposition on the my interpretation of the world, but I see your point.  Also I think I posted this in the wrong section.  Is there a way I can delete this or is this post stuck here forever?