Umbral Noir 1,556 August 5, 2013 Share August 5, 2013 (edited) Hey everypony! This is my first fanfiction. It's about eight ponies that find themselves shipwrecked on a desert island. It isn't long before they set off on an exciting journey full of adventure, laughs and romance in the hopes of getting back home to Equestria! I would really appreciate it if you guys could comment (both positive and negative) to let me know what you think of it, or what needs improving! Here are the first few chapters: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105909/a-tropical-odyssey Edited August 6, 2013 by DJ-BRONI3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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