adventure Alicorn's Creed Part 1: Joining the Creed

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Alicorn's Creed 

 

It never was easy adjusting to becoming part of the Creed. 

Many have had the honor of  becoming one, but they never liked it.

Although our story begins with a young pony who has always dreamed of becoming a member of the Creed. 

This ponies name was Hopper, the reason he was named this at a young age was because he always, well... hopped. 

His mum and dad always knew he'd be great but...... not being in the Creed, his parents thought him to be a royal guard for Celestia, and this is where he will experience the thrill of his life. 

Hopper always hated being a royal guard, it might be the fact that whenever a letter from Twilight Sparkle he's forced to check it for bombs, or the fact that Celestia always has boring and girly conversations with him. 

But soon one day a great evil approached Celestia, this evil was called the Templar Ponies, they approached slowly and aggressively.

They knocked down every guard who halted them. 

luckily for Hopper Celestia was talking about getting her hooves painted red, Hopper had dozed off until..... "SMASH" Hopper jumped to his feet to find that the Templars had grabbed Celestia and sprinted away. 

Hopper ran out of the kingdom as fast he could, until a wall of Templars stood in his way, he stared up and gulped but with a giant leap he was over. 

A hoard of Templars dived in front of the young hero, they had the upper hand, there were thousands of them and one of him. 

He stood his ground "you want some?" he shouted cockily his voice was rough, he even saw someponies flinch. 

Hopper was a goner until..... the Creed dived into action they were so fluent in combat Hopper just stared in awe, he would've watched all day but the show was interrupted when "HELP!" Celestia screamed at the top of her lungs. 

Hopper shook his head to snap out, but he wasn't awake for long because with a fatal blow "CLANK" he was out.

When he woke up he was in the presence of Shining Armour.

"We could use a Ponie like you" said Shining Armour proudly

Hopper's face lit up with excitement. 

Edited August 11, 2013 by xXBr0ninat0rXx