visual art My Pokemon Art- Give me your honest opinion

[Slice0Pie 815]

Hello, I am here today to show my Pokemon art. I haven't drew pokemon in such a long time, so give me your honest opinions on my art

What should I change?

What should I keep?

I would love it if you helped

Anyways, here it goes!

[000 206]

Your art is very good, just a bit of practice and you will be golden. Especially the last one. That is where i see a bunch of potential.

[Dddrgn 450]

It's fine, you do need work though, especially in the area of body proportions. No worries, it's better than I can do pokemon-wise, just make sure to use lots of references. One of the hardest things for me is to remember that I have to visualize the pokemon as a three dimensional being, and make it appear like that on paper, The angles need to appear as if It's actually turned properly, and not flat. Keep practicing, and you will be fine!

[Commander Tangent 861]

I think it looks quite nice, though there are a few areas that look like you may have been pressing the pencil down to hard and erased. Other then that, a few mishaps in the outlines would be my only major complaint.

[Static Electricity 729]

It's okay.

 

The second one is very good, but the others are kinda meh. I'd make them more cartoony (rounder heads, less neck).