Rarity & Sweetie Belle

[PonyBoy15 428]

Here's a drawing that I did about 2 months back. I was intending to scan it on the computer and digitize it with colors and stuff but due to life, I don't have the time anymore so this is how it stands.

 

Sweetie Belle: Rarity! Wake up! I'm going to be late for school.

 

Rarity: Sweetie Belle, you were supposed to set the alarm last night!

 

Sweetie Belle: Whoops, guess I kinda forgot *squee*

 

Rarity: Well, I can't just take you to school with such a messy mane darling!

 

Sweetie Belle: But, there's no time for that, I'm going to be late!

 

Rarity: Nonsense, there is always time for some fashion.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Criticism welcomed.

[A Jewel of Rarity 207]

looks good it gave me an idea

[Tech Reel 443]

Nice job man, it looks awesome!

[MorganaRarityRainbow 89]

you did a very fine job there

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

Looks lovely, kudos for managing to make the background show accurate looking.

 

-Rarity's horn seems a bit small and her legs seem just a tad too long

-maybe make her mouth just bit bigger, it is a bit hard to make out atm

-Is Sweetie belle possessed (eyes)?

-The wall behind Sweetie seems a bit plain.

[PonyBoy15 428]

 

 

-Rarity's horn seems a bit small and her legs seem just a tad too long

 

yeah now that I look at it, it does lol

 

-Is Sweetie belle possessed (eyes)?

 

shes has a happy expression on like this ^^ so her eyes are closed.

 

 

 

-maybe make her mouth just bit bigger, it is a bit hard to make out atm

 

I dont think i added a mouth yet haha thanks for reminding me

[Valormos 262]

Love it looks very cute

Keep up the good work

[Wingnut 6,725]

I like this.  I was a bit confused by Sweetie Belle's eyes until I realized they were closed.  XP  And I like seeing raw pencil on paper drawings too.