Arylett Charnoa 4,916 Posted December 30, 2013 Author Share Posted December 30, 2013 @@Wolfe, Of course! Wow, you really got me by surprise. I thought you were dead or something. You're reserved. We're starting tommorow. Try to get your form in by then. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfe 71 Posted December 30, 2013 Share Posted December 30, 2013 After the edits, here's Brave Heart! He's had a drastic change within the last year or so. Pallette swaps, differing backstory, and the cutie mark appears! Here you go!http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brave-heart-r46 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rascal~ 657 Posted December 30, 2013 Share Posted December 30, 2013 Yay, I can't wait for the rp!And I love your commissioned pics @@Wolfe, I love JitterJives artwork and style Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valete 194 Posted December 31, 2013 Share Posted December 31, 2013 @@Wolfe, For some reason, your OC reminds me a lot of my OC! This is going to be interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfe 71 Posted December 31, 2013 Share Posted December 31, 2013 (edited) Just a quick note. I modified the Shifted backstory, as I realized I might as well update that and that it still had details of Brave Heart's old palette colors. Aside from that, everything should be in working order. Edited December 31, 2013 by Wolfe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arylett Charnoa 4,916 Posted December 31, 2013 Author Share Posted December 31, 2013 After the edits, here's Brave Heart! He's had a drastic change within the last year or so. Pallette swaps, differing backstory, and the cutie mark appears! Here you go! http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/brave-heart-r46 Accepted, of course! :3 Would be pretty silly if you somehow didn't make it into this one whilst being in the first. ATTENTION! The RP has now started. Here's the thread. Have fun, everything, and let's make this awesome! (Note: You don't have to be as long as my intro post. It's just long like that because I needed to establish a lot to start off with) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonbacon 384 Posted December 31, 2013 Share Posted December 31, 2013 the rp link in your signiture says open though its closed might wanna change that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arylett Charnoa 4,916 Posted December 31, 2013 Author Share Posted December 31, 2013 @, It was just recently closed, so that's why I haven't changed it yet. I only just accepted the last person who had reserved and wasn't officially accepted, so now it's officially closed. Now it's changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonbacon 384 Posted December 31, 2013 Share Posted December 31, 2013 i was gonna join with my pegasus oc but meh that's ok il so go melt my brain on gimp. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rascal~ 657 Posted December 31, 2013 Share Posted December 31, 2013 I'll be making the waking up/reveal post tomorrow, just wanted to extend on how she would get there and then make the next post all about that. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfTeRwArDs 509 Posted December 31, 2013 Share Posted December 31, 2013 Oh yay, the RP's started! What's up with all the colored dialogue though? 'Cause if we're doing that I call dibs on green. :U Anyhoof, I shall be making my post momentarily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Contrast 292 Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 Back, and time to do some reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arylett Charnoa 4,916 Posted January 1, 2014 Author Share Posted January 1, 2014 Back, and time to do some reading. Sure as hell do. There's a LOT going on. @_@ Like Ampharos and his silly character who has me giggling. I LOVE him. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfe 71 Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 Sure as hell do. There's a LOT going on. @_@ Like Ampharos and his silly character who has me giggling. I LOVE him. :3 It's really interesting that this character is from another time period on Earth! I like that! Adds variety to this aside from regular character personalities and progression. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ampharos 1,009 Posted January 1, 2014 Share Posted January 1, 2014 Yea I feel like it's gonna be a bit hard to right for him, just cause I'm gonna have to have him be confused about literally everything the others talk about Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arylett Charnoa 4,916 Posted January 6, 2014 Author Share Posted January 6, 2014 (edited) @, I've observed your latest two posts, and I'll have to say, I'm not really impressed with the quality of them. There's a lot of typoes in the first, more so than the acceptable level for this RP. The second has your character appearing out of nowhere with little detail or description of their shock and reaction to being in a new world. They just walk towards the others casually, not wondering what types of creatures they are or who they are. There's really no sort of depth to it. So I'll have to say this: I'll give you a chance to improve, and I'll give you advice to do so. But if you continue to perform like this, I'll be forced to remove you. My apologies for being this blunt, but there's no other way I can say it to make it sound nice. Now, I'll give you some advice here: Try giving your character some more depth to their emotions, actual reactions and contemplation of what is happening rather than having him appear out of nowhere and kind of just walk up to the other ponies. And make sure to keep your spelling and grammar in check. All right, so the first post exploded. But worry not! I rewrote it entirely from scratch because I'm pretty aware it'll take them a while to reverse the weirdness and I don't have the patience to wait. Tell me if I missed anything. Any rules or such. :3 Edited January 6, 2014 by Arylett Dawnsborough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rascal~ 657 Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 @,I have a question Arylett, would it be possible if we can use that cool rp code that's going around for our rp. The one where our avatars and that become our characters, it may enhance the experience and make it easier? I'm just thinking that it would be cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arylett Charnoa 4,916 Posted January 6, 2014 Author Share Posted January 6, 2014 @,I have a question Arylett, would it be possible if we can use that cool rp code that's going around for our rp. The one where our avatars and that become our characters, it may enhance the experience and make it easier? I'm just thinking that it would be cool. If it's possible, I don't see why not. Didn't know there was one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rascal~ 657 Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 @,I've been in a couple rps where they used it. Though one of those there was over 12 people so it was needed to get through all the confusion, and it also places the links to the character page and occ in the bottom of each post to make things easier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senor Citizen 515 Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 I'm pitching a tent outside the door, because when someone drops out, and they will, I want to be here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ampharos 1,009 Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 No now I'm gonna be forced to make a visual design for Forgefire! D: (jk) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IridscentNionios 1,412 Posted January 7, 2014 Share Posted January 7, 2014 Everytime i see an interesting roleplay like this it just is full or something. I mean i am all in for being active and stuff and i am lucky enough to have found a roleplay that hasn't just been sleeping for freaking eternity but other than that roleplays kinda tend to just die off before the story actually completes itself... *sigh* Sorry for my rant... i just thought this was a great RP and i am kinda sad i lost the chance to join it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arylett Charnoa 4,916 Posted January 7, 2014 Author Share Posted January 7, 2014 All righty, if people keep expressing interest about getting into this thing, I might just have to open up two more slots. We'll wait and see. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IridscentNionios 1,412 Posted January 7, 2014 Share Posted January 7, 2014 @, Alright i'll be here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arylett Charnoa 4,916 Posted January 9, 2014 Author Share Posted January 9, 2014 Hey people, I've just made this plot-moving post and suddenly you all stop posting? ;~; It's been one day, so the two post rule isn't relevant anymore. So c'mon, let's keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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