Inkfeather 597 Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 This Heart Every piece split for the corners of the world. Picked up one by one in a quest to complete. A puzzle to be solved by one person only. This person, a hero of love will help me. Will hold me tight in need and kiss my tears. Though, I am still searching far and wide. Turning every rock, checking every corner. TO be sure I will find him when time is right. A burning gaze hovers in the night and day. Always looking for the smallest thing. A will to go on as I think about him. My spirit refined at the thought of love. Hugging life as I would embrace him. Kiss him deeply when I know destiny is due. Ever waiting, ever looking, always alone. He must chase away the solitude of night. And brighten up the corners of existence. Be the lantern that will kill the shadows. The symbol of joy, to bring me my smile. One must never surrender to fate, one must love. 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonshy 2,305 Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 Very nice 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sheogorath 1,151 Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 That's a pretty well worded poetic description of devotion, yet I get a sense of cornered feelings, with only one way out. You really feel as isolated as that? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted March 17, 2012 Author Share Posted March 17, 2012 That's a pretty well worded poetic description of devotion, yet I get a sense of cornered feelings, with only one way out. You really feel as isolated as that? Thank you, I'm glad to know that I'm getting better at wording my mind and soul into poetry. And yes, that is how I feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mephala 2,631 Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 That was really, really good Ink. I'M NOT CRYING, THERE'S JUST SOMETHING IN BOTH MY EYES. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vicke 3,184 Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 VERY well writen. But yeah. What can i expect from you x)? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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