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I pushed aside the navy blue curtain with my lime hoof, flipping my curly cyan mane out of my face. All was quiet in Ponyville. No obnoxious merchants waving their goods from Celestia knows where around, shouting out annoyingly high prices in those screechy foreign accents of theirs. No crowds pushing through the streets of Ponyville, their high-pitched chatter awakening all of those who just wanted to sleep in for once. No buskers singing off-key tunes. Just peace and quiet. Turning away from the glossy window, I gave a hearty yawn. I slip into my bathroom and grab a brush in my hoof. Half of me wanted to be a unicorn just so I could pick things up without taking a hoof of the ground. But lucky me, I was born as the most boring kind of pony. Earth. The only thing good that came of it was more strength. That's it, nothing useful, nothing impressive. Just strength. I stared into the mirror as I ran the brush through my mane. A fair mare stared back. I have always hated my lavender eyes. They look so out of place considering I have a lime green coat and an ocean blue mane. The one thing I did like about myself is my cutie mark. It is one like no other. I didn't know any other ponies who had a cutie mark that ran down their leg. Frankly, it looks pretty badass. Pulling the brush through my mane one last time, I smiled at my reflection. I looked presentable, which was good enough for me. I trotted out of the bathroom and downstairs. I had a fairly nice house. It meant cleaning up a lot to keep it in fair shape but it was a price I was willing to pay. I sauntered through the front room and swung open the traditional wooden door. Walking through, I slammed it shut behind me. I have always made a habit of strolling around ponyville before most ponies are up. It's strange really, to see everything deserted. I only bumped into a 5 or 6 ponies at most on these walks. Nopony that special. Yet.

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My horn starts to glow,as my eyes turn jet black.I start lifting up a random pony by her neck,it was a mare,not much tall,nor was it Melody. My eye twitches,as I send the pony flying,my eyes turn bac

@,    The lights flickered on again. I forced my eyes to adjust to the bright, illuminating light. Suddenly, everything snaps back into focus. I sit up and playfully poke Antonio's chest. "Don't do

@,   "I can't say I've been through the same hardships as you..."I sat down and placed a forehoof on his shoulder. "But I can say that I feel complete now that I've found you," I nuzzled Antonio's

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Rag Stitch made his way thought the small town of Ponyville. He was looking around with big eyes full of wonder. He's never been there before and he was going to make sure he had a great time. He takes out Dishcloth out of her pouch. "Well Dishclothwe made it to PonyvilleI hope we get to make some friends." As he was walking, he bumped into someone while he was talking to Dishcloth. He quickly shied away and shut his eyes. "I-I'm sorry, I did't see youI didn't mean it, please don't hurt me."

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@Gloomfury,

Brick woke up before sunrise as part of his original routine and rubbed his eyes alittle and got ou of bed and looked to see if he needed more fire wood or food, and he was running low on both , well this means i will need to go to ponyville to buy more food but first i need to cut more firewood the woods get alittle to cold at night to not get firewood first, he left his cabin and went out to cuts some wood. 2 hours later he had enough to last him for a few weeks, he lookt up and saw the sun was rising, oh my i hope i can still make it in time before it gets crowdy, Brick rushed over to ponyville with nothing more than his vest and his saddle bad containing a few bits, he arrived but to his suprise he did not see any traders only a few ponys, huh where all the traders i ust have ran faster than i thought,well i would talk those ponies but i am afraid my size might inntimidate them and im to shy anyway, as he was walking to a nearby bence a pony bumpt into him who said sorry please dont hurt me. Brick held out a hoof and said haha dont worry about it so uuuh my name is brick, he said akwardly hehe, so whats your name? The pony held what seemed like an old dish rag close to him said very softly rag stitch. Well its nice to meet you mister rag stitch so what uuh brings you to ponyville?

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Melody woke up from a peaceful night and stretched. She then lit her horn and played a sweet tune with the wind. A bird flew through her window and chirped a continuation of the tune as it landed inside Melody's mane. "Morning birdie." Melody said as she got out of bed and walked slowly towards the front door. She quickly combed her mane beforehand. 

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[FIRST RP POST YEEAAAAAA]

 

Jazz sighed, keeping her eyes down as she trotted through the town square. She really did not want to be here. It was still morning, and she was hoping that she would have been able to escape the crush of the daily Ponyville bustle, but it seemed that every other pony had had the same idea. There were too many ponies already for her taste, despite the streets being practically deserted. All the more chance for accidents. She paused, using a hoof to expertly brush her mane so that it shielded her face, and continued on her way, staying silent and shying away from the sounds of hooves. Woe is me.

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Melody walked slowly out of her house. She found a place to lay down. She laid there and let a tune play from her horn attracting some nearby birds who started to sing with her tune. She was in a place where ponies could see her and not hidden from the pathway. 

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"This world,its like no other."This is the story of my life,the helpless alone foal that grew up to be a mighty stallion.I forgot to introduce my self,my name is Antonio the Alicorn.A pony like no other.This world is changing,shifting in seemingly nice,beautiful ways,but it all felt so so wrong.Why am I alone like this?I thought to myself,wiping a tear from my eye.I hopped onto my computer,then with my controller,typing in Facenook.I sigh,"Nothing new today",so I got up from my chair.I walked downstairs,having a nice beautiful house I bought with my bits that I stole.

I made myself breakfeast,nothing new just a apple and some milk.I went out outside,blocking the sun with my hoof.'Strange'I thought to myself,most ponies are up by this time,but I saw a pony,a lime green pony with a ocean blue mane.I froze in my tracks,staring at the pony.I shrugged it off,probably gonna reject me anyway.

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Atheia.

 

Picking her way carefully though town by hoof had been... Interesting, for the Hippogriff. She generally preferred to fly rather than walk, and the whole 'village' thing always troubled her... what was it with ponies and their complete disregard for each others privacy? Places like this were never completely quiet, they never stood still, not even for a moment...

 

Yet here she was. There was only so long that she could live off the land before stocking up on supplies was required, and for that she needed civilisation. She needed to trade. Ponyville was fairly small as far as towns go but that didn't stop her feeling terrible pressured as she settled down in the centre of town, set her bags on the ground and began to lay out a display of just a few of the bottles, jars and bowls of herbs, tonics and potions that she specialised in. Off to one side were a number of fancier bottles filled with more colourful liquids that were clearly designed to attract attention.

 

She was prepared! Hopefully someone would come to investigate. Settling her grey coat and cherry-blossom wings, she set to measuring out some herbs into a stone bowl while she waited.

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Melody continued to play the tune, and soon finished. She then got up and continued to walk the streets of Ponyville. She headed for the marketplace. She was walking rather slowly and shyly, taking hesitant steps. "I hope...I'll meet somepony nice today..." She thought to herself. 

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I sighed then I went to a hippogriff who looked like she was trying to sell some things.I then look at her,holding some bits in my hoof,"Do you sell these things you're displaying?"I ask the hippogriff,with someintent of getting some potions of poision.

 

P.S Change to OC,adding a image and making him a alicorn

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I saw a jet black stallion looking my way. He stopped and stared at me for a little, then trotted off. Flattered, I followed him up to a stand run by a hippogriff. I tapped him on the shoulder.

"I saw you looking at me," I said.

I didn't matter if I messed around with this guy. No biggie. Right?

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I turn around,looking at the pony.I was about to say something,but then I froze in my tracks.A squeaky little voice comes out."Hi...?"

I then shake my head,returning to normal."Uh Hi...."I say.My mind says to me,"Say something!""Uh,um,uhhhhhh..."

Useless mumbling comes out of my mouth.

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I snicker a little bit, but stop myself short. He was already nervous as it was and I didn't want to make him look like that much of a fool.

"I'm Gemini," I hold out my hoof for a hoofshake and bat my eyes seductively. I flip my forelock as I wait patiently for him to reply.

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I shake my head,making my mind clear."I heard that snicker ya know,"I say.Well,this mare is sorta my crush,I accept the hoofshake."Name's Antonio,Nice to meet you."My heart is LITERALLY pounding in my chest.I start scratching the back of my head."It's been long since anyone's talked to me"I say with a touch of doubt.

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Melody continued to walk until she came across a stallion and a mare chatting. It seemed as if the stallion was very nervous around the mare. She walked up to him. "D...don't be nervous..." She said taking a step back and lowering her head a little bit. She really wasn't the mare to walk up to somepony and start up a conversation. 

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A little mare shy mare who was walking past jumped into the conversation.

"Oh, I didn't see you there. Do you want to hop in line? I wasn't planning on buying anything,"I gave a submissive look to the mare. She looked very timid, as if she'd jump at the sight of her own shadow. I felt sorry for ponies who lived in fear of contact. I figured it must be terrible to have to shut yourself out from the world. 

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I notice Melody,and say to Gemni to pause the conversation for the moment."Hello."I say to Melody.I was really impatient,wanting to get back to talking to Gemni (She's kinda Antonio's crush :3)"What's your name?"I ask Melody

 

 

 

 

 

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"No..." Melody said in a low voice, but loud enough for the ponies to hear her. "I'm very shy as you can see...it's because...I'm just...scared that...ponies won't...like me..." Melody stated as she sort of hid her face in her mane a little but failed to do so. She sort of combed her own mane with her hoof. 

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"Look at me,i've been ignored for my entire foal,life and how I am now!"I mention at my cutiemark(Its a computer)I then pull out my phone,turning the lights off and shutting the door in my house,also drawing 500 bits from my virtual bank.I put the bits I had in my hand into my virtual bank.

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Jazz spotted a gathering up ahead, and tutted in annoyance to herself quietly. They were right in the middle of the pathway out, and she couldn't exactly find another way, so she just walked over, keeping her head down, and trying to stay un-noticed, and attempting to skirt around them. She tried to lean away as they leaned back, and just generally keep her distance. She stepped on the edge of the griffon's blanket, and flushed a little in embarrassment, but continued on her valiant attempt to shuffle around them.

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"You are such a sweet little mare. I'd bet you'd be the toast of the town if you got out there," I smiled gently, then continued.

"Everypony would love you if they knew you for you. If they don't, then that's their loss. Now hurry along," 

 

Filler is fun, isn't it? I love fillers!

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"You mean...they would...want to be my...friend?" Melody asked as she took several steps back from the mare. A beacon of light was revealed. Maybe this was it. Maybe Melody could find the perfect stallion for her who would love her no matter how shy or timid she was. 

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"Of course they would! Maybe today, you should try and find that somepony,"I suggested.

I looked over at Antonio who was waiting patiently for us to finish our conversation and mouthed 'just a sec'.

 

Some more out of character filler, because I hate these minimum characters

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I take notice in Jazz,but I didn't really care.I was waiting impatient for the foal to give me a answer.

I open my mouth to speak,but closed it,I didn't want to attract any attention to her,"Besides" I thought to myself,"I already have enough attention on my hooves."

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"O...okay." Melody stated as she continued to walk. She then decided to stop by a nearby stall and try some new sweets. She tried one and was satisfied. Melody then lit up her horn and started to play a tune with the wind. This attracted some nearby birds who joined in.  

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