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Sneaky

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    You really need to know? Somehwere in California.
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    I'm a surfer and a wrestler. What more is there to say?

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  1. The only significant thing I can think of is when I was on my computer late at night a few weeks ago. I felt something crawling on me, shined my computer screen light at my arm, and saw a fast little spider crawl off me and onto my bed. I started smacking it with my palm over and over, until it curled up into a ball and the last hit sent it flying off the bed. Not sure if it was really dead, but I was the victor in that fight. Especially since the last one I had ended up with my whole arm swelling up...
  2. This isn't a word i can't pronounce, rather a word everyone else pronounces wrong. "crepe" is actually pronounced "crep," but americans like to say "crape." Which is fine, but the other day when I said 'crep' my dad corrected me with 'crape.' I got annoyed, but didn't say anything. *fluently
  3. I agree with this. Magic? Talking ponies? Dragons? Talking dragons? Tartarus? Cerberus? Manticores? Magic? Talking ponies? Magic? Magic? Magic? The list goes on and on, people. Did I mention magic?
  4. FINALLY another Coheed and Cambria fan! I was starting to think I was the only one Well, not literally, but you get the point.
  5. Dunno if I've seen any classics yet, so I'm just gonna leave this here. Also, on a separate note, more metal. Coheed and Cambria, ladies and gents.
  6. I wonder if instead of making elements to counteract the Elements of Harmony, one could make elements that have the same amount of power and are all virtuous traits, but what ends up happening as that it creates an imbalance of good and bad and results in chaos?
  7. That's how you see your brother? XD Truthfully, I'd like to see how you pull this off. Normally, I'd think it would be hard to add content to a story centered around a recluse, but then again, Twilight Sparkle. Are you posting on fimfiction? Send me a link when you have the first chapter out, I'm curious.
  8. Because Fluttershy is effing adorable is why. I mean, I'm only adding this part because of the character limit, but just look at that face. A small little cute smile and those big blue eyes. How could I resist?
  9. *facepalm* Why do I assume that everyone on the internet is male? (Not counting the duck-human hybrids on Facebook) No, no, you're not coming off as an attention seeker. It's just that once you start writing a fic that gets attention, it can turn into a greed thing. (I want MOAR!!) And technically, you're not in the wrong forum. It's just that I've never found this place very useful when it comes to fic critique, or the like. This right here is one of the best advice threads I've ever seen. https://mlpchan.net/fic/res/3348.html#3348 I would suggest you go there noaw.
  10. Nah, man, it wasn't you. I was referring to an "Oh dear baby Jesus. Not another human in Equestria fanfic." No names, since it's not good to single people out like that
  11. You didn't say you were a new writer but I'm just going to assume you are because you're asking for help here. As much as people like to hate on HiE and pony OCs, I'd say you're on the right track. A few things I'd just like to point out are that, for one, you're planning on making a fanfic that's seven books long. Realistically speaking, neither you nor your audience will probably have the attention span required for that, so just compact it. Plots and arcs can be shortened into subplots and plots, making more happen in a shorter amount of time. Secondly, only one fuck can be given about your audience. I'm saying that when you feel it's right, listen to what your readers tell you, as they've obviously read what you have to write and can tell you some useful info, but don't constantly worry about what everyone's thinking. It'll make you too nervous to enjoy writing, thus reducing either the quality or quantity of your fic. Remember: you're writing for your own entertainment, with the audience being a bonus. Also, attention-whoring is bad. Attention whores are like wet dog crap; they stink, and because of this, are easy to find. Don't be an attention whore. Lastly, get a proofreader. I can guarantee that you're going to get writer's blindness, which will render you unable to see shittons of mistakes you make. A proofreader's second opinion will help you find these mistakes. And really, I'm kind of disappointed by any negative responses to this thread. You don't even give this guy a chance, and you're ragging on him already. Don't negate, offer advice in a positive or neutral way.
  12. Hm... How about this. Having a house on a good plot of land, a forest perhaps on a mountainous terrain. Living off of the land, having maybe one or two dogs to live with, and enough money saved up to occasionally buy supplies, extra food, necessities, etc... Some good friends to hang out with, and I really don't care whether I have a girlfriend/wife or not. Oh, and you said no restrictions? A secret portal I have hidden somewhere in the middle of my forest that only I know about, that lets me cross back and forth between Equestria and Earth. I could bring some Earth inventions to Equestria to patent, so I'll have backup money in case I'm running low back on Earth. All extra bits I get from my wealth would be donated to worthy causes.
  13. How about when there are two opposite-gender characters, and they always fall for each other in the end? That one annoys the heck out of me, most of the time. Otherwise, I'm willing it to happen the entire movie.
  14. For me, if I don't consider someone attractive I find that sort of thing creepy. And I'm straight, so that kind of attention from a guy I'd definitely not enjoy.
  15. 1.) Cream Soda 2.) Strawberry Sunkist 3.) Root Beer Most of the other sodas, since I'm not a huge soda drinker, taste like they have too much sugar. Me no likey.
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