ShadowBean

Silly people ^^ Sena is best looking anime character in history

Why do I have to make all these long posts for something that not require a long post ?

(I have been away from the forums for a while)

@@ShadowBean,

Who is Jokuc? That guy must be a real nagger if he tells people to look at my threads!

I for one, Mr. Nibblers wants to speak to him, it's good to hear people like what I do...

 

 

Anyways, thanks

 

@@ShadowBean,

Who is Jokuc? That guy must be a real nagger if he tells people to look at my threads!

I for one, Mr. Nibblers wants to speak to him, it's good to hear people like what I do...

 

 

Anyways, thanks

 

Whoaw, I still can't manage to make long posts :/

dafuq ? double quote ?

Jokuc was nagging me to make a comment here so I did XD

But in all seriousness, it looks really guud

I lol'd so hard at Luna bouncing on the moon and when the sea ponies appeared ^^

But great work Jokuc really well done!

So when are we getting started ?

And dafuq is this, why do I always need atleast 100 characters to make a post ?

My critique:

• What happened to her highlite in her hair? It should go throughout the entierity, not just the inner portion.
• Her eyes seem... dead. She has no pupils, so it is just a blank stare.
• Her underbelly is a little unproportional.
• Her wings are a little too small.
• Her tail is lovely, save the end. Comes to a point, which is not really wanted. You should have more of a spiky ending, it may be generic, but it looks fabulous.
• Her cutie mark is simple, yet efficeint.
• Her hooves aren't round and straight enough. Her only good hoof is her outer left one. The rest are misshapen.

Nice drawing for a 2nd picture.

3/5

 

Thanks for the good critique, you always point out the errors I can't see

I think the head is very nice on this. My main problem is with the wing. At portions of it, especially towards the right, it starts to get mis-shapen. That's something that needs to be improved. Another thing I'd like to point out is the thickness off the back legs. They seem rather lanky for her size.

And with your art, you may want to experiment with different shading techniques. Sometimes, one solid color can be bland.

Overall, though, your work isn't that bad.

 

Thanks for the good critique it's very appreciated I'm still trying to learn all the tools in SAI

Uhmm... Well... This is my second drawing I've ever made on a tablet and I think ended up much better than my first one Except that the head is a little bit too big....

hhhmmm... I got an idea... ....But it will take so long time to make.. hmm

 

@Jokuc

Eeh, different styles.

 

I know

Got bored and made a full hd render of her :3

 

Tablet users UNITE!

Its always good news to see more people with their tablets.

I must say though, it is very good for a first time tablet drawing. I remember when I first got my tablet! It was a mess TxT

Lol my first drawings looked like ovals with the sides smashed in by a hammer. If you need help with photoshop let me know, I'm a master at it.

I can't tell if it's because of my iPad or not, but always be sure to save in png format because jpg causes there to be visual artifacts in the image. Additionally I don't know if it's just your style, but the legs seem to be a bit too thin maybe? That is, of course, if you were aiming for the shows style.

 

Wonderful color scheme this is definitely a must download

Keep up the work! I look forward to seeing how you improve as you become even more adjusted to your new tablet!

 

Yeah the legs is kinda small now when you mention it That is kinda my style but I'm workig on improving it so thanks for pointing that out

Nice job for starting out! I would recommend using Paint Tool SAI in the future (especially if you use a small tablet) because of it's amazing stabilization feature, but keep going!

 

Thanks for the tip Ezy And I'm using PS because I got for free when I bought my tablet.

Good job! Tablets are friggin' hard to use.

 

I noticed And thanks

Nice job!

 

Thanks

Looks awesome Shadowbolt!

 

Thanks

Yeah, so this was my first time using a Tablet and I think it ended up pretty good I'm still trying to learn how PhotoShop works and stuff.

But here it is

I got a new haircut today