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ShobieShy

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  1.  

    Lyrics:
    Well if you're guessing it's me, you guessed correctly.
    I just
    Stayed with Fluttershy
    That's how I was able to hide
    from your little elements
    and with her by my side
    you can't turn me to stone
    Man that's gotta suck for you Twi
    Now let me see
    what kind of chaos I can wreak
    over here we got some flying sheep
    and over there we have some blue beats
    wait what is this here, a pony enjoying my rain?
    hey Pinkie Pie that'll give you a huge tummy ache!
    you don't care you say?
    well go on my little pony and play
    you other ponies are bland
    just wait til you see what I've planned
    go on drink as much as you can
    these raps are as random as me
    Frying pan

    all you do is hate on my chaos so hard (so hard)
    just line up and come take a drink from these clouds (these clouds)
    cotton candy clouds
    all you do is hate on my chaos so hard (so hard)
    just line up and come take a drink from these clouds (these clouds)

  2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=We6CT6wWrQQ

     

    Lyrics:

    [Chorus]
    Diana's
    Diana's
    Diana's Rampage
    (x2)
    Diana's Rampage
    Diana's
    Diana's
    Diana's Rampage

    [Verse]
    Bloody parties
    Vile smiles
    Fake cakes
    Broken laughter
    Maddened monster
    Left alone to fade
    My kin met my blade
    Did they expect me
    To resurrect happily
    NOW THAT'S INSANITY

    Gummy ate the remains
    I ate the guts
    He left the brains
    The mind's of sluts
    Seduced by sane
    Executed like mutts

    Pinkie said bye
    With a chuckle
    Diana said Die
    With a cackle
    Thy psychopath's path is full of wrath hath thou gone mad cow if so run now

    Five friendly friends
    Five deadly ends
    Let games of sin begin till fin

    Twilight you're so bright
    And intelligent
    Let's turn your purple pigment
    Burnt and crisp like my resentment

    RD can you hear me?!
    You're so bloody and
    Tasty perfect for pastries

    Rarity rare as can be
    So generous
    Machete sharp you be
    So murderous
    I'll cut a diamond out of the rough
    but be warned it's going to be tough

    Applejack's so honest
    And genuine
    I'll hit my hardest
    and smash a swine

    Fluttershy don't cry
    So kind
    Not suicide
    That's fine
    Total genocide

    [Chorus]
    Diana's
    Diana's
    Diana's Rampage
    (x2)
    Diana's Rampage

  3. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1H6GyVa6Mo

     

     

    Lyrics:

     

    This poison joke

    Is no Hocus-pocus

    It's a rope

    No hope in this

    Venomous cannabis

    Just pray you don't choke


    Shit missed my hearing

    Royal G hating

    Shining yelling

    I'm winking

    Cadence blushing

    Tia and Luna

    Banishing

    I'm still rocking the lunar goddess

    From the land of comets

    Twi says I'm gonna die

    I tell her as a teller

    My life been a strife

    So a hi and goodbye

    Are never a lie

    This zebrin herb is killin my verb

    Making me feel like derp

    They say I'm gone

    truth be told

    I'm a Bit old

    Back from the beyond

    But not gone

    Still but still going strong

    From las Pegasus to the las mistress


    This poison joke

    Is no Hocus-pocus

    It's a rope

    No hope in this

    Venomous cannabis

    Just pray you don't choke


    I'm riding in my chariot

    Blazing it

    Spike just lit it

    I rolled it

    Both took a hit

    Outta the pit

    Windows fogged by nimbus

    Made to Olympus

    Sup Zeus you in this?

    The decadence of self transcendence

    Thanks to canvas were the devil dances

    My outlet is volcanic sometimes I panic

    Excess anxiety is killing me

    Can't you see

    Poison is my only remedy

    For my creativity


     

    • Brohoof 2
  4. This is the first song in Arcane and I's new album. 

    We're collaborating with Pierce Strine. 

    Pierce will be making the instrumentals while we rap to them.  :D

     

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GQnvh5mhqJk

     

    Lyrics:
    (Chorus)

    [shobieShy]
    We got the Ponyville Knights
    with'em every night is alright
    Never got worry about a fight
    Got Celestia's light

    [shobieShy & Arcane]
    Ponyville Knights
    with'em every night is alright
    Never got worry about a fight
    Got Celestia's light

    [Arcane]
    Ponyville Knights
    with'em every night is alright
    Never got worry about a fight
    Got Celestia's light

    [shobieShy & Arcane]
    Ponyville Knights
    with'em every night is alright
    Never got worry about a fight
    Got Celestia's light

    [Verse]

    [shobieShy]
    When there's a ruckus in tartarus
    The main six; they got this
    So Cerberus, just don't fuck with us
    When at a precipice
    Of diss-aster
    The twin sisters
    got the massacre
    So sir: don't stir
    we will endure

    [Arcane]
    In this menagerie of Harmony
     we got RD
    Ripped and ready
    speedy as can be
    Just ask shobie



    [shobieShy]
    Generosity be her game
    she tha dame to bring tha pain
    Rarity unmatched beauty
    unmatched fury
     
    [Arcane]
    Got the protege
    of the queen
    who makes the day
    she's so keen  

    [shobieShy]
     Got Pinkie pie
    so energetic
    I'll see you fly
    make ya look pathetic

    [Arcane]
    Fluttershy got the stare
    and what a glare
    It'll make you feel bare
    and give a good scare

    [shobieShy]
    From diamond dogs to magical fogs
    From dragons to armageddons
    From trixies to a cockatrice
    they've kept the peace (x2)

    [Arcane]
    There mere presence stiffens griffins  
    They gave nightmare moon a nightmare of doom
    They can deal with any ordeal
    they give bronies that feel that's so surreal

    (Chorus)

    • Brohoof 1
  5. The beat is kool no doubt. But i think you need to work on your flow a bit. Plus maybe how you deliver. Listening to this it kinda sounds like you're bored and just talking at me. I doesn't feel like you 2 are really putting your all in and you can really notice. Put it this way, the energy you are putting into this rap is not enough to make me think you believe in what you a saying at all.

     

    Sorry if im sounding harsh, but im just pointing these things out so that you get better. IMO next time just go harder with your delivery. I think you'll see a massive improvement once you start to hear more enthusiasm. 

    Hope you keep this up man!  ;)  :P  :derp:

    Thanks for the critique!  You should hear my older stuff; It's even more boring and monotone. 

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