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  1. I have not forgotten this thread and more I have more pony art to share the first is one of my oc the second is babs. The second relied pretty heavily on my refs however my oc was free handed.

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    Now babs

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    That's it please give me since feedback and thank you ahead of time. Btw the resolution shouldn't be giant but I uploaded them on my phone so idk.

  2. I have to say that this does look quite nice, with the luminosity from the fur and the colored background giving the piece an otherworldly feel to it.  Very cool and almost gives an air of tranquility as well.

     

    With that being said, there are a few points that I do wish to point out to help you next time.  Though the anatomy of the wolf itself is fairly solid, the back would have a more natural look if you gave it a slight curve downward, as it is a bit too straight at the moment.  The head could also be a bit larger, to fill out the proportions better, but it still looks quite alright as is.

     

    Just a couple things off the top of my head, but I still think you did a good job with this one.  Keep it up and I hope to see more in the future.  Take care! ^^

    Thanks for the feedback man. I'll keep your pointers in mind when I make another piece.
  3. So I drew this today it's a picture of a wolf I drew it because I was bored I was hoping I could get some feedback from some of the folk on this forum. I would've put this on my other thread but this isn't really MLP related and I didn't wanna start breaking any rules.

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    Please give me some kind of feedback anybawdy thanks.

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  4. I agree with some of what Kings said but I think the cheek looks fine and I have seen ponies with a sharper style before so I think that is just a style choice. The way the back is completely straight makes it look like the position isn't very comfortable and makes it look a bit unnatural. The flat mane on the back also makes her entire backside straight. I think some smoother curves might make it look better, but it's up to you.

     

    All in all I think it's not bad, and yes you should post some more drawings here if you make some =p.

    Yea ill post more drawings later today I'm always making harses. I mean always... Anyways thanks for the feedback goes to that king fellow up there and iris but not melon. I'm not gonna let him get up on my turf.
  5. So like I was just chillin' getting some feedback some from friends about this picture I made and they were like "OMG IZ SO GUUUUUD" and I was like "Ok I can't tell if you guys are just trying to make me feel good or not so I'm gonna put this picture on the mlp forum and get criticized and its gonna be really embarrassing." So Here's a fullbody sitting picture of my OC I made just today. Also I think I'm just gonna post all of my OC picture on this thread or something because I don't wanna flood the forum with my Posts considering I'm drawing these things all the time. I'll gladly accept any kind of feedback I know I'm not that good and I need like TONS of work so please assist me you folk of the forum.

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  6. Well this is a hard one I think...

     

    1. Return of Harmony-When I first watched mlp I was completely unaware discord was a thing but when I heard the voice of John De Lancie the same actor that plays Q from Star Trek TNG it was an ultimate nostalgia and in this episode especially he perfected his act and the writer nailed the his lines. He was exactly what I could want him to be in a show like MLPFiM. Like the moment when you first here discord's voice when celestia finds out the elements are missing is like the best thing ever in the entire show.

    2. Princess Twilight Sparkle-I really liked this episode because of the way it worked on the effects of the past and it was sort of like the beginning of when Twilight Sparkle had to take up her responsibilities as an allicorn. I thought it was pretty well put together and I thought discord was a good comic relief and was used in just moderation.

    3.The Crystal Empire-The Crystal Empire was probably the only two part episode that made gave me the feeling that something bad could happen. You know that feeling that's sort of tricks you into thinking the main characters could lose due to the fact that they face several inconveniences throughout the episode.

     

    That's my top three right there I would've rated em all if I wasn't so lazy.

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  7. to be honest it looks fine, maybe clean up a little around the edges. Does your oc know any other expressions besides the "i wanna blow up the world" face? :P

    Thanks for the feedback, I guess it wouldn't hurt to be more attentive to my linework's cleanliness and as for the expression I mean it's just the face I felt like making I guess maybe I won't do that face anymore or something idk.

  8. So I mean I had to start somewhere posting stuff because I'm kinda new so I just worked up this portrait of my OC. It's completely open for criticism of all kinds even if said criticism is it sucks. Like for real anyone who looks at this you don't need to be all nice about it I need to get realistic criticism to improve myself.

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    Thar ya go...

     

    Edit: I looked at this thing like a few hours later and was like oh my god what went wrong so I changed some stuff. Chances are I'm gonna go to be wake up the next morning and notice more problems sooooo.

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  9. My Favourite Mane 6 Pony: Pinkie Pie

    How did you find MLP Forums?: I found it on google and was like this looks like fun.


    How you became a fan of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic: Like hulu plus or like amazon prime idk I eventually started watching the show for free on dailymotion so there ya go.

    Hey, How's it going forum folk I'm ActualMelon. If you're wondering if I'm actually a melon I am but not any old melon for I'm half tree, Half of THE tree to be exact. But to be serious this forum looked pretty fun and I like the show and I like the idea of an Original Character because I'm a fan of making pretend characters inspired by a show. I've drawn some of these ponies in gimp I'm not that good I just do it for fun really. ANYWAY, If you folk are wondering what kind of music I'm into, I really like Eminem and pretty much any rap that isn't about money and hoes; that music disgusts me tbh. I've lurked on these forums a little bit but I've just decided to look into it I hope I manage to fit in here I'm pretty casual and not too edgy (I'M REALLY EDGY) so yea hope I get to know you folk of the forum.

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