Forgot my first result running through one of my ocs, but it was a low number, so I went through again and highlighted every single thing that might be BORDERLINE yes, and still got a 20.
Well Shiz. And here I thought Nixran "The Bulwark/Dragon's Fist" Ironhide was a Mary Sue...
Apparently having a >Half-dragon half-Pegasus< OC wasnt bad. I verified a LOT of texts, and went through 4 seperate Mary Sue tests to check him...
and he's apparently a borderline anti-sue.
Maybe that's a sign I should not have removed his resistance (Not Immunity) to magic.
There's one more I have to test it, and guys, this is a big, long one, but it's a freaking beast at hammering EVERY SINGLE point that might make you a Mary Sue.
http://www.springhole.net/writing/marysue.htm
Is the link.
200 questions, and leaves nothing out. Even has about 30 de-Sueifiers at the end.
Long, and worth it. It's universal.
For mlp ocs, make sure you look at the questions in context of the mlp verse
Oh I just posted that, too. Lol
I also really need to think of some weaknesses Nixran has. He's not, nor has ever been completely immune to magical attacks, and.....
Really should take this to a character discussion