MattyM12

Hello @MattyM12,

I'm moving this to the Writing Resource subsection; hopefully you'll find some solid feedback there for your story ideas. Have a great day!

okay thanks and have a nice day too

Batpony, YES!!!! THAT WOULD BE AMAZING!!!!!!!

I was actually going for the mysterious mare do well as batman... I think it makes sense and twilight seems to be the better option then rainbow dash or applejack

Yeah so I was thinking of this for quite a while now. And I just wanna see your views on my ideas.

 

Now I'm not gonna give a lot of things away, just a bit

 

1: Twilight sparkle as the mysterious mare do well. This is an obvious choice of course, twilight is famous for her royalty, she's smart, she's an alicorn, she has a butler who cares deeply about her ect, ect

 

2: shining armor as the commissioner. Of course he's gonna have a different rank like commander or captain but once again it makes sense right?

 

3: Trixie as the riddler, do I even need to say? A narcissistic, semi intelligent and crazed lunitic out for revenge for those who humiliated her...

 

Anyway so those are certain ideas I have in mind for a fanfic I might create... So don't be shy to voice your opinions I won't bite!

I'd just recommend working on using commas to separate clauses.  Other than that, it seems good .

 

Oh, and try to keep separate paragraphs for different speakers.

oh okay thanks... Like I said I don't understand punctuation well... I think it's cos of my autism, but I do try to improve

He'd be terrorizing ponies, be a bigger threat than anything we've seen in the show, manipulating ponies, and making a lot of deals. That's for sure.

yeah that's the type of thing I'm going for actually

Guys, guys, you're missing the obvious thing. A Battle Royal between Bill, Discord, and the Tantabus! I'd watch that Death Battle.

yeah I can see that happening

Bill Cipher seems like a foe for Princess Luna.

yeah I agree with that, because they both enter dreams

What would be so hard to beat him in Gravity Falls it's done in a snap in Equestria. ELEMENTS OF HARMONY ONE SHOT.

 

I doubt the elements work on anyone... Besides they can't risk another plunder seed attack

I think he'd be great friends with Discord. Depending on whether Discord's good or evil at the time, of course, because evil Discord and Bill would probably take over Equestria, where good Discord might genuinely attempt to stop him.

yeah... Main word there being "attempt"

We already have that. It's called The Return of Harmony.

ha ha well you have a point there

That's fine, take your time! Quality over quantity, after all.

thank you very much I appreciate it

Ooh, that sounds interesting. I'm a huge fan of crossovers, so I may give it a read when its done

thanks... Though it may take a while to finish

I could see him trying to convince Discord to join his side and trying to get Twilight to expand the mirror that leads to the human world to other dimensions.

 

Honestly I could go on and on about this, but I'll keep it brief for the sake of the discussion

funny enough in the fanfic I'm working on, he creates Discord by making a deal with him.

 

He also convinces Twilight her friends will die from old age and she won't due to her being an alicorn, then makes a deal with her to get rid of the immortality and wings.

 

Don't ask what their end of the bargain was... Like I said it's a work in progress

Bill Cipher: Hey, don't lose your hair over it. *Snap finger and all of Rarity's hair falls out.*

Rarity: *Morbid scream.*

huh... I can actually see him do that

Hello . As this topic talks about a crossover, it is considered to be fan content. Therefore it has been moved over to Sugarcube Corner.

 

Have a nice discussion ^^

okay then have a nice day

Soo yeah... I've been thinking about this ever since I made him the arch nemesis of Symmetry (my OC) of a and the main antagonist of a story I'm working on and I wanna see what you guys think...

 

What would happen if Bill Cipher came to Equestria?, was he there before? SO MANY QUESTIONS

I'm defiantly out of Fluttershy or pinkie... I like making people laugh and being kind... Also they're many of these equines I would defiantly go out with, so here's four...or five

 

1.AJ

2.(if OCs are allowed) Alice Goldenfeather

3.RD

4.Luna

5.FS

I think it looks pretty good! Your punctuation doesn't look that bad to me, either. I don't read fan works often, but I like this concept as well. It looks like it could possibly go in a dark direction, which could be very interesting. Nice!

thank you I appreciate it

(This is nothing more of a taster of something I've been working on in my head for quite some time... Tell me what ya think?)

 

Twilight wakes up to see everything around her has changed, the whole place around her turned grey, as if the colour of her surrondings have been sucked out of them, time has also seemed to slow down.

 

As twilight inspects her surrondings, she hears an all to familiar laugh, her eyes begin to widen, she got into a fighting position "I know you're here Cipher why don't you come out of hiding" she shouts, Bill teleports in front of her "hey there Twily... Ya missed me?" He replies in a mocking tone, "hardly, what do you want?" She asks, Bill seemed to be happy she asked that.

 

"Well ya see kid I only came here to help you" he replies, Twilight gives him a confusing glance "help me? With what?" She asks, Bill seemed happier "facing your fears" he simply replies, Twilight's eyes widen "I don't know what you're talking about" she lies, Bill seemed to enjoy this "don't play dumb IQ with me kid, you know darn well what I'm talking about... Aren't alicorns immortal?" He replies.

 

"Let me answer that for you yes they are and you are an alicorn, shame really" he finishes, Twilight looks at him in a frustrated way "what is?" She asks, "oh nothing just the fact that your friends will die whether or not by some supernatural force... Perferably me... Or by the twisted hand of age while you will just sit there and watch" he replies, "no no no you're lying" Twilight replies.

 

"Am I Twilight? Am I really? You know inside I'm right, you just can't accept that you won't be dying alongside your friends by age... How sad is it knowing that?" He continues, Twilight finally snapped "SHUT UP" she shouts at Cipher, firing a bolt of magic at him. It went through him but didn't kill him.

 

Twilight finally fell to the ground crying her hooves around her face. Bill floats over to her "I'm sorry kid, but you needed to hear that, immortality costs a lot of sacrifices... Even if it means your sanity... But I can help, I'll get rid of that nasty immortality and those wings... All I ask for is a small favour in return... So whattdya say kid? Do we have a deal?" he asks, his hand now engulfed in a blue flame reaching out toward Twilight

 

Twilight thought about it but made her decision "fine... You've got a deal" she replies shaking his hand.

 

 

So whattdya think? I know I'm not that good with punctuation, but I'm working on it

I have a theory about this, Equestria is a future earth due to humans dying during a nuclear war, and the animals and magic and other stuff we see in Equestria is nothing more then mutations and radiation, evidence for this is the ends of Equestria, we see a wasteland, nothing more then a desert filled with killer animals

I have a theory about this, Equestria is a future earth due to humans dying during a nuclear war, and the animals and magic and other stuff we see in Equestria is nothing more then mutations and radiation, evidence for this is the ends of Equestria, we see a wasteland, nothing more then a desert filled with killer animals

Celestia can't Luna said so herself in "do princesses dream of magic sheep". But I thin Discord can since... Well he's Discord

This may not count so much as he is an actual actor instead of a voice actor but the guy who plays sheldon in the Big Bang theory (or jontron who isn't even an actor)

I don't like her... I love her, and not in the best pony way I mean I literally love her, her personality,her strength,her looks and the way she sings

She didn't do what she did for her own personal gain, she did it for the boutique just her methods were bad is all, so she's good in my book

Applejack (my waifu) or Breaburn

 

I honestly don't hate anypony in the show. That is mostly because they all seem very adorable or just plain attractive. That applies to Applejack a lot, but I really can't hate somepony just because they don't have much of a past going for them. In my opinion, and I apologize if this offends anyone in any way, but I think Applejack is probably the sexiest character in the show (And especially in Equestria Girls). I probably do not need to explain my attraction to her, since the whole thing might just be subjective, but I do think she is physically attractive. It's probably all that country swagger she has.

 

But, all in all, I do like Applejack.

yeah I agree with you on that one in fact my post is all about why I'm actually in love with her (judge me if you will), anyway I find her attractive as well but more like a school crush way.

At first Applejack wasn't my type of pony, but now I really like Applejack. I actually have a little crush on her. She has progressed as a really great character now and her country style has really grown on me.

story of my life, when I was starting out as a brony I hated characters like Zecora and AJ, but soon I grown to like them and the even fall in love with AJ and Zecora is awesome in my book now

It depends on the OC itself, if you make a Alicorn OC fine more power to ya but the least you can do is (1) if he/she isn't genetically born as an Alicorn explain how he/she did become one, or (2) if he/she is genetically born an Alicorn give him/her some personality.

 

An example is my OC Symmetry (the pony you can see on the profile) he is a hybrid between a Pegasus and a Unicorn, he has Pegasus wings but not a Unicorn horn yet can still use his Unicorn based abilities, now this make his childhood (or is it foalhood?) a living hell for him, peers bullying him, calling him a freak for his abilities, he had little to no friends making him shy, and in his adulthood he believes he's a monster and thinks these abilities are nothing more then a curse.

 

To me being a character isn't based on how OP they are, it's how the writer,actor etcetera expresses them, like Superman or Captain America it ain't about whether or not they win a fight, but more of if it's the right thing to do, so yeah

I love AJ I really do, it might seem weird but I do and here's why, she's a kind,friendly,funny,nice and all awesome mare, she's incredibly beautiful, I mean she is gorgeous without even trying to be, and her singing voice...GOD I love that voice, she not only looks like an angel she sings like one too, I mean seriously I was in awe when she was singing that lullaby. So there you have it... You may judge me now if you wish

So like the creators of Gravity Falls did for the Wendy and Dipper ship?

Derpy hooves, Fluttershy or Pinkie , Fluttershy is shy, timid and kind pony, Pinkie likes making people laugh and smile and Derpy probably has some neurological condition that she doesn't let get in her way. And all three of these suit me like a glove