Wow, that's quite the essay you've got there. Quite an interesting read too. However if you'll forgive me I have a few critiques:
1. I don't think Celestia and Luna were crowned princesses immediately after the Unification. "Horse Play" shows us that Celestia was only a student during the early days of Equestria and only came to prominence after she moved the Sun for the first time. My guess is that she became an alicorn shortly afterwards and then was crowned.
2. The Pillars were founded after the Unification and so could not have been accomplished by them.
PS: I do not think the Journal of the Two Sisters is canon anymore. It has several inaccuracies in it that I no longer use it as a valide source of information.