ShadowLadyEsme

It also goes on the left.

 

I don't think so, I very rarely ever see them on the left except for fanart.

Odd, nevermind. Must've been some animation mistakes.

Requests are open? Really?!?! May I?

Random buuuut

Cutie marks only go on the right flank

Ah screw it, at least now I don't have to pretend I am that little headache of a pony. You will not let this get out! Prepare to meet your demi-AHHG

 

*after punching Eggmare* Would you shut up? Ok guys go back to asking questions. It's really me this time.

 

I think I prefered eggmare....

What ruse? Im...Sonic...really.....

 

ou think that blue text will fool me.....silly egg.

What how did you kn-No no I'm Sonic. Old baldy Mc Noisehair is somewhere else. Probably in his Egg Carrier wondering why he can't beat me. The real Sonic....

 

Yes, because that's ever so reasurring. My shadows see right through your ruse!

What are ya taken about I am the real Sonic. The reason im a pony is well...It's a long story but I am the real one.

 

You never answered my question. I had asked why you were so egotistical because....if you are to be the true sonic.....you are very much out of character.

Perhaps you are not Sonic! But an imposter! Like a changeling....or what's his face Egg-dude.

Sir, why are you so egotistical? The real sonic (hedgehog) isn't nealy so cocky.

PS: Had to, just....had to

Mare, I thought cast didn't want us telling everyone? Hmm....anyways....should I make an audition too, even though I'm already approved?

Pinkie's OKAY. I don't really like most of the mane characters though......but Pinkie is still somehow my favorite mane six. Doesn't mean I necessarily like her though.

It's perfect!

That's beast Illusion! ESME IS A FILLY!

Princess Luna of course.

WE NEED MORE POSTS! MORE PEOPLE!

(ok then I can say your second post is a world better than the first one for sure but here is some constructive tips...use commas, find better words for the actions happening so...instead of..

 

'Morning star went to find his sister Queen Esme. He put on his

death shroud. He kept the shroud on to alter his appearance. '

 

Something like this...

 

'Morning star made his way through Canterlot, In search of his elder sister Queen Esme. He quickly put on his shroud of silken darkness, the magic of the death shroud giving one the ability to alter his form into that of one less intimidating. A smile crossed his lips as he traversed Canterlot undetected, a simple joy to be had in being a Wolf in sheep's clothing. To blend into the flock as you stalk your prey and the Shepard none the wiser.'

 

see? Its just how its said, use of metaphor and descriptions. Roleplay as if you are writing a story. Let us see what you see, feel the cold,smell the grass ect sensory usage makes it go from words on a screen to writing that creates emotional responce. I hope this helps also by doing this reaching the 5 sentences are no longer hard. I come from advanced rp to where you need to have 3 paragraphs minimum and all speaking must be separated into paragraphs, so one characters line of speech per paragraph.It takes some practice but think as you do it 'is this how I would describe what I am doing?' the more realistic the better.)

 

(That's very good, mare)

Its adorable!!!!!

Do me! Do me!

Accidental post

 

 

I'm very glad you like it, you know, that pony OC has gone through 3 other generation with me while I was growing up with the franchise, and (despite how simple it is) am still very glad with it's finished design, and hope to revise it a little bit more by the time the 4g ponies are through and onto the 5g.

 

 

 

What is it you would like to know about the eyes?

 

How do you,nake them look so good when they both show?

Cute! Did you make this or did u find it?

 

He quite obviousely used General Zoi's pony creator

You should do an intermidiate version too, no way you can loose with two versions.

I love it, all hail thy queen

 

Why thank you, my subject

She looks alot better. Still dont like her though

I am horrible.

 

Your not horrible, just take your time. This will all be sorted out soon enough.

 

 

well I could always have sonic start taunting you if you like, he is a troll and a half and it would be good for you to post off of and what not

 

That sounds like a good idea to me

Let's i'll give it a shot i'll take a look and see what needs to be fixed. if it can't be fixed then i am going to have to scrap it.

 

Please do NOT quote in the actual roleplay, it's against the rules. Also, I would like it if you didn't post your peice of the roleplay multiple times.

I specially like the second one.