Evil Pink One

oh and I just learned that " I myself " is redundant.... so I'ma try removing some of it too....

oh so, they're disgusted by Madeline

well you should probably change it from "they're face where always frowning." to "they were always frowning."

since frowning is something people do
so its kind of like saying "feet walk" or "hands clap" or "skin sweats"

.... well that's what the young Madeline is seeing.... she has no idea if they're mad at the news or sad or in dread. and sometimes it's best that it is vague so the readers won't know why they are frowning.... it's up to their imagination.