I've been writing a fanfiction that sees Godzilla enter Equestria to do battle against a new monster summoned by Grogar with The CMCs being some of the central characters in it.
There is a moment in the story where Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo want to know why Apple Bloom her happy go lucky self and instead more quiet and reserved, and so they read her diary and learn of why she's been so distance.
When I wrote the chapter that moment happened in originally I had Apple Bloom see them with her diary, and she gets rightfully angry and storms off resulting in her getting captured.
However I have since rewritten the chapter to have Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo hide Apple Bloom's diary before she sees them with it, and the two of them lie to her by saying everything is alright after she asks them what's wrong, to which Apple Bloom accepts and goes off own her own. Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo are later confronted by Diamond Tiara and Twilight who berate them for Reading Apple Bloom's diary.
I want to know which version is better the first one or the second one?
Um it's Apple Bloom's Diary not Sweetie Belle's, and Diamond Tiara and Twilight know because they overhear the conversation.