GreyScholar

Do I have to make mention of A Royal Problem? I really personally dislike that episode, and would rather ignore it if you might allow it. I honestly think one of the comics handled the premise a lot better.

On the rest, I can see what I can do in at least mentioning key events from the show.

Honestly, I intentionally had the backstory stop right before the show pilot on purpose... partly so that I wouldn't have to constantly add to it and because those who have seen it would know of said events.

"She isn't too fond of vegetables either - I mean, has anypony ever seen her with any?"

Weeeellll, there was that party with Mr. Turnip. Then that Head of Lettuce float with the CMC.

Can I make a quick edit of this character's name, from Stardream to Star Dream? This is also not just the name and title, but within the bio as a whole.

Thank you, I have added Rose to my Signature. Maybe I can find a roleplay for her soon, and introduce her to others.

Also, since I had forgotten to say anything before. You welcome, she isn't quite how I envisioned her but Rose is still in a position that I would be fine to play her if she meets approval.

Any status on the second approval?

Updated

But... but, I don't want to give up her having a cutiemark.

Sighs, on the rest I can certainly have that all fixed up. I can add some detail on the dislike for selling or giving away a love potion to someone she feels shouldn't have it into the backstory.

Updated based on what we discussed by PM.

Sighs, I guess I could change a few small details here and there for her to only be deer, though they would be such that they change very little that is important if anything about her. Like Ruby Star is Rose's stepfather, but since he is the only father she knows he is in all ways important her father. She would introduce him or speak of him as her father.

Also, she would create a potion that give her coat a shine and appearance like that of a crystal pony. That way she could be more like Ruby, if not by blood then their bond and her wish to be like him. As such the Appearance section of the bio would only have a slight rewrite of the wording, otherwise her appearance will be the same.

Also, if we were to agree that it is impossible for a moment... what of magic? Perhaps I may offer the possibility for consideration that there is magic existing that might allow a pony to have a child with a non-pony.

Yet again, this is a magical universe and it is fairly common in fiction for different races or sentient species to be able to breed together. Half elves, half vampires, even half dragons have been shown in fantasy so I argue just because deer and horses/ponies cannot breed in real life doesn't mean they can't in a magical land such as Equestria.

This is a magical world of candy colored ponies, a shapeshifting race of love eaters, a spirit of chaos, a shadowy tyrant of fear, sibling diarches who control the movements of the sun and moon with one traveling into the dreams of her subjects, a pool of water that allows one to make a copy of them self, as well as magic that can do all sorts of amazing things, to name but a few aspects of this universe... yet you believe it is impossible for mixed race couple to come together and have a child?

That just doesn't make any sense, especially just by going off of the excuse that there is no canon support for something. This doesn't mean it can't be something that can happen, just perhaps that it wouldn't be common.

Understood and thank you

Sent a PM because of lack of formatting in the comments section seems to have, at least when I'm on mobile.

Updated information on Stardream's Talent in Other, also updated Personality to fix up the first line.

Hmm, I will see what I can do about the formatting as well as explaining the capabilities and limitations of her talent.

Yes!!

Often in the past it took a while because moderators had to 'discuss' on my character before approval.

Changed... and honestly I am glad for that. For much the same reason as you gave I dislike using an actual number for the age.

Thank you for letting me update the application.