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Youth Sonic(Mason)


Maurice AKA Phan. Sonic
  • WIP: Yes
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Title(s): Sonic Ring Holder
Species: Human
Age: !0yrs(TC)
Gender: Male
Residence: Has No Home
Hometown: Afterlife
Occupation: Being The Hero

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Backstory:

Born in the afterlife world by the gods´ use of magic for a married couple(unknown as of this point), This young kid obtains his powers from a gem that resembles a Sonic ring for the wrist. He has made alliances with many worlds, so what could happen in the world of Equestria? Maybe the fact that he hasnt mastered his powers yet, or that one wrong step can end up getting you killed? Mason seeks out wisdom for controlling and mastering his power, so why not have Twilight and the others help? After all, what is there the Magic of Friendship can´t do?

Life before Equestria: This kid just doesn't know when to stay hidden. At age 3, he was deemed unnecessary by his parents, so he got sent to Earth, and his power was keeping him in danger. Luckily he was taken in by Sonic, who saw the Youth Sonic in him. But as Mason grew so did his unstable power. Now, what will lie ahead in Equestria...? 

How Sonic found him: for when there is great power there comes the great power hungry G.U.N. team from Sonic Adventure 2. Sonic rescued the kid from nearly getting killed. Mason was in awe when he saw the Blue Blur. Sonic had to take the kid in so he wouldn't risk death. But they worked together many times to fend off Dr. Eggman. And now Youth Sonic was requested to go to the Mane 6 to control his power for good. 

Mason has found a place in Pinkie´s heart, as he starts a romantic relationship with this party loving pony. It took a while, but effort pays off.

 

Personality:

Youth Sonic has many personalities, depending on his emotions and attitude. Most of the time he is pretty laid-back, nice, and can be charming, but when his friends get hurt, he could turn into his dark form and possibly end up killing the harm doer. But Mason always knows when to celebrate and when to fight for what is right. And then there is Sonic and his annoying friends ending up trying to roast each other. Mason can end up feeding in...

Pinkie Pie, whether human or pony, makes this hero topsy turvy for her.

Physical Description:

White Human resembling a Mii in an Empowered Sonic Racesuit, Has messed up spiked hair.

Likes: Heroes, the Mane 6, Sonic the Hedgehog, anything with a party, magic, love for Pinkie Pie
Dislikes: Villians, being disrupted by evildoers, loneliness, friends being harmed, roast battles ruining his reputation
Key Moments:

Being with Tails and the Sonic Universe for the first time as friends

His gift to Pinkie Pie making her happy(Taking Control Story)

The start of his Dating with Pinkie Pie.

Magic Spells: Speed Of Sound( Sometimes Light)
Magic Spells: Sonic´s Super Form
Friends: Anyone With Hero Beliefs, Pinkie Pie(Gf)
Rivals: Eggman, Infinite, Sonic.exe,Metal Sonic
Reality (Generation): Generation 4

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I feel that this character needs more detail in his backstory. As of now, this character is borderline Gary Stu. Change the immortality and put the character in a place where he is working towards achieving his full potential. This way, your character won't be regarded as overpowered. 

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An exact age is the best. You're still missing gaps...how did sonic find him? How was be born in the afterlife world? How does that even work. Maybe I'm just overanalyzing this character, but I just feel that this character needs a ton of work. 

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2 minutes ago, UI Tails said:

So if it gets to the point that I can use it how do I make a forum for questions to this character?

 

2 hours ago, UI Tails said:

I edited my character again. I think I'm confused on what do edit next. For now, I will just consider this a WIP.

My suggestion would be to establish a story within Equestria. The majority of ask threads are made for characters who have well established themselves in Equestria. However, that doesn't mean you can't post an ask thread. 

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