Dashing Commet

By Dashing Comet

• November 3, 2014




Age: 18

Gender: Female

Species: Non-Pony

Appearance: She is a Batpony.

Cutie Mark: Shooting stars. They mean potential and her desire to win be the best as she can be and for her friends.

Personality: Relaxed, optimistic, and random in all is possible. Tends to be quiet at times unless she's in a crowed or with friends she closely knows.

Backstory: Her life was pretty hard during her foal years. She and her family lived upon the open and quiet outskirts of Cantelot her family were rich and Nobel kind <br /><br />of a family, though for Comet she's quite the opposite. For her vulgar acts and being improper, she was shouted and ridiculed for being so "common", so different. <br /><br />She was then shunned from her family and left for burden to her family, Comet only replied with scornful eye's at her parents as they slammed the door right in front of <br /><br />their ones "beloved" daughter. Comet began her trail walking and finding some place to be as her tears dripped upon every second doubt in her current position in her life. <br /><br />She had a small supply of food and 20 bits she happened to grab before she was kicked out in her stitched up saddle bag. She hated the sight of this town and the <br /><br />ponies that lived here, it gave a rotten taste to her tong. She decided to live and find hope else where at PonyVille, though she may have a hard time finding any <br /><br />pony that's up at night though she still kept her self pride and confidants up at all times possible. She had finally found the Canterlot train station, she chuckled to her self in <br /><br />relief that their was a ticket pony still awake on his job at this time. She walked to the train ticket auctioneer, "One ticket to PonyVille please." Comet said in a quiet <br /><br />tone. The chestnut stallion looked down at her with his strong emerald eye's, "That will be 5 bits" he replied, I carefully handed out the needed bits for the ticket <br /><br />needed upon the next train to arrive.He hand her the golden ticket, and happily grabs the ticket from his hooves. She sat on a near by bench awaiting for the train, An hour past and suns almost set, Comet began to get quite drowsy, until <br /><br />loud sound of engine roared and the sounds of the train cried out the train came to a halt. I jumped up off from the bench nothing but 10 seconds flat galloping smiling with excitement to the <br /><br />Stallion shouting to aboard the train to PonyVille, until he noticed The sky blue filly. I flashed my golden ticket to the Coal coated stallion, he nods thus lets be aboard the train as i settled on one of the seats of the <br /><br />train. She was finally able to relax her aching muscles, as soon as the stallion shouted his last call to PonyVille, he walked inside and closed the doors behind him.<br />The Train slowly began to depart from Cantelot and From watching the city slowly going smaller, now nothing but snow coated mountains. As the train rocked so did Comet <br /><br />and she slowly drifted to sleep awaiting her next adventure of a new life and possibly friends...real friends.