My attempt at a commentary (I am new to the youtube scene)

[Mane Quest 104]

Hey guys, this is partially to show my attempt at a commentary (I sometimes had to watch them because it was the only way I could access MLP I wanted to return the favour by adding my input the the commentary scene) and also so I could get some feedback, I don't expect people to think it is good and I can see that many people may not enjoy commentaries which is fair.

One last thing, I screwed up a little at first, the first 22 seconds for some reason didn't actually seem to record my voice, and of course, I am really awkward so sometimes I may be a little weird.

Anyway, any feedback would be appreciated so here it is:

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FlDcM1KTIw8

 

Wait, how can I delete this duplicate one, I am not sure how it posted and I don't want it to be spammy, sorry for the inconvenience.

Edited April 9, 2015 by Flame Tail