Twilight and the Underworld's Mission

[Freaky Dolphin 15]

Hello everypony!! 

I'm new here and I bring you a comic of my own creation

Ihope than you like it...or you don't unlike it at least n.nu

 

First- Excuse my English in the post, but actually my real language is Spanish. But don't worry, a friend helped me with the lines in the comic, so it should not have problems with that n.nu

 

Second- This the summary plot: Twilight, commissioned and helped a bit by the other princesses and carrying with it nothing but a bottle of mysterious contents hanging from his neck, should she make herself a mission in the depths of the underworld, a mission that she never suspected he would have to meet. Twilight may complete this quest? 

Read this comic and find out!!

 

Oh!! One last thing

This comic is not painted!! only the edge lines and a few exceptions. I'll put now 2 pages (may i'll submit another later).

 

Now, enjoy it !!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thats it!!! I welcome your comments, thanks for read .

 

See yah!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I decided to climb a few more pages n.n

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited April 30, 2015 by Freaky Dolphin

[Freaky Dolphin 15]

New pages for the comic

Enjoy it!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That's it.

If you like it please coment or just dive it an broohoof.

Bye

Edited April 30, 2015 by Freaky Dolphin

[Freaky Dolphin 15]

Hi, new page here

enjoy it

 

 

 

[Grepper 3,192]

I think the comics look good.

I spotted some errors that you may want to correct.

• In the first comic with the sleeping Parasprite, the text reads "Tecnical problems," when the word is properly spelled technical.
• The second comic reads "where am i," when the "i" should be capitalized. This point may be pedantic, though.
• The third reads "Princes Celestia," which really should be princess.
• The fifth is missing an ending quotation mark in the text the way.
• The last one is more personal. I find the cursive font on the last one somewhat hard to read.

I like your drawing style. Is your decision to leave the ponies uncolored except for their outlines a stylistic decision, or have you not finished them yet?

[Freaky Dolphin 15]

I think the comics look good.

I spotted some errors that you may want to correct.

• In the first comic with the sleeping Parasprite, the text reads "Tecnical problems," when the word is properly spelled technical.
• The second comic reads "where am i," when the "i" should be capitalized. This point may be pedantic, though.
• The third reads "Princes Celestia," which really should be princess.
• The fifth is missing an ending quotation mark in the text the way.
• The last one is more personal. I find the cursive font on the last one somewhat hard to read.

I like your drawing style. Is your decision to leave the ponies uncolored except for their outlines a stylistic decision, or have you not finished them yet?

Hi, thanks for coment

First, oh ok, thank you for  letting me know, I'll try to fix the mistakes

Second, the cursive font is for give's Luna a kind of elegant dialogue, unfortunatly, paint has no so much options, so i was to choose an small print -.-

Third, actually is an stylistic decision n.nu

Well, i think than thats all.

See ya at the next time

Bye

 

 

 

 

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Hello everypony

New page here 

Enjoy it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited May 1, 2015 by Freaky Dolphin

[Freaky Dolphin 15]

Hey, here another new page

enjoy it ( and son't worry, in the next page will not appear another escena like this n.nu )