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Gems, Ice and Dice. (My first fimfic)


J.R.

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Here it is: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/262930/gems-ice-and-dice

Can you guys tell me how I did? I plan for it to be a long fic with multiple chapters, but I wanna know how good I did for this first one. Thanks.

Please be honest and tell me your full %100 opinion, thanks.


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Ice Blizzard, one of the coolest ponies you're ever gonna meet. Also, Rarity is, without question, best pony. :wub::DMy Youtube Channel  IB's Profile

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