AspenSwift 153 May 9, 2015 Share May 9, 2015 Hello, my name is Aspen! I saw that there were a lot of people in this forum asking for help with their OC, and I thought about making a lil' place for ya'll to ask me my opinions and thoughts on them. I don't have many credentials, but I do have a lot of experience with color scheme, character development, and personality crafting. I will probably respond to you by the end of the day that you post your OC. Anyway, I guess that I'm open for business if you want some help! Can't wait to hear from you guys! My OC Link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Powderpuff 390 May 13, 2015 Share May 13, 2015 Heyo, I'd like to hear your opinion on my OC! I hope it's alright that the link goes off-site; everything below the second picture is irrelevant. http://chat.ponytopia.net/profile/Anura Thanks for doing this! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AspenSwift 153 May 13, 2015 Author Share May 13, 2015 (edited) Heyo, I'd like to hear your opinion on my OC! I hope it's alright that the link goes off-site; everything below the second picture is irrelevant. http://chat.ponytopia.net/profile/Anura Thanks for doing this! No problem! First off, you are really an amazing artist! I really wish I could draw like that I also really like Anura's color scheme; the pink and brown of her hair contrast quite nicely. The only problem I could find is that the attention tends to wander away from the eyes, and people usually use a bright color close to the face to bring the view back to it. For example, all of the mane 6 either have light colored eyes or have bright colors close to the face to bring attention to it. Rainbow, Twilight, and Rarity all have darker shades of eyes, but Rainbow has the bright mane color, Twilight has her pink streak in her hair, and Rarity has the eye shadow. Of course, that's all just extremely nitpicky As for personality and backstory, I honestly couldn't find anything wrong. Her tendency to be nervous is an excellent example of character flaw, and we all know that a good character is not a perfect one. I couldn't find any contradictions or redundancies, and I generally enjoyed learning about her. Thank you so much for sharing her with me! Edited May 13, 2015 by AspenSwift My OC Link Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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