Dash-N - Last Time (feat. Summer Breeze)

[Dash-N 13]

 

A song I made after getting tired of seeing all this brony hate for no reason at all. Hope you all like it! This is dedicated to any and all bronies who have been bullied in the past.

 

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This song is dedicated to any and all bronies who have been hated on and bullied. Stay strong, guys! Don’t let haters get ya down /)

Thanks and shout-out to Summer Breeze for singing the chorus and hook! https://mlpforums.com/user/33449-summ…

Download: https://pony.fm/t21730/dl.mp3

Follow me on Twitter @PepperLightning

Lyrics:
[Verse 1]
All these haters keep talking, and they trying to say
That I shouldn’t be a brony, cause the sh*t is gay
It’s the kind of thing I deal with every single day
They think I’m a joke, and think I just like to play

But hey, it’s okay, you know, I don’t fret
Because I know that the suckers don’t get it yet
But that’s okay, they think I’m uncool?
Too bad, I still wear my signed shirt to school

Yo, it’s all okay to express yourself
And don’t let no one tell you anything else
It’s not cool to go tell someone that they should die
I’ve gotten that so many times, and here’s why

The b*ds pick on us for watching a show
I don’t understand, it’s just not worth it, you know
If you’re a hater I don’t care about the junk you say
Keep talking while I’m walking away (foal)

[Chorus]
You can say what you have to say
I’ll still take ponies any day
I nearly quit from the stuff that you said
But that’s the last you’ll get in my head

You can say what you have to say
I’ll still take ponies any day
All that talk that you talk might work on some
But it’s not gonna work on me

[Verse 2]
It’s true, at first, I didn’t really understand it
That whole thing with Michael was pretty damn sick
And it ticked me off, man, like what the hell
What kind of guys would make a kid try to kill himself?

My prayers go out to you little mister Morones
I condemn all the guys who dare to condone
What those bullies did to you, but just stay strong
Get well soon, man, and keep moving along

And other bronies who get bullied, know you’re not alone
I’ve been hit with every kind of insult known
But don’t let it weaken you, let it make you tough
And let these bullies all know when enough is enough

I’m like a strong wall that’s supporting our fandom
We might get broken up, but I’ll never cave in
If you’re a hater, I don’t care about the junk you say
Keep talking while I’m walking away (foal)

[Chorus]
You can say what you have to say
I’ll still take ponies any day
I nearly quit from the stuff that you said
But that’s the last you’ll get in my head

You can say what you have to say
I’ll still take ponies any day
All that talk that you talk might work on some
But it’s not gonna work on me

[Hook]
Why does it always seem to be
Some hater’s always judging me
All I really need is some room to express
Express, express

Is anypony out there listening?
Cause I can’t stand to keep this in
All I really want, I’ll say it again
Again, again

[Chorus]
You can say what you have to say
I’ll still take ponies any day
I nearly quit from the stuff that you said
But that’s the last you’ll get in my head

You can say what you have to say
I’ll still take ponies any day
All that talk that you talk might work on some
But it’s not gonna work on me

[4HFan 476]

I can agree with every word of this song, been told to kill myself everywhere. But I stood strong, didn't listen to them, and I'm still here. Also, I love the fact that this is a lyrical adaptation of High Road, by Fort Minor feat. John Legend.

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Ok. 

 

First off, every word you say is so true in the lyrics. Though I wouldn't swear in them, but I see why you did since...well...the haters do that. But maybe make a version where you sub out the profane words for cleaner words? I don't know...

 

Some technical notes:

 

The singer is off on her notes. It seems like she was struggling a bit to keep up with the tempo of this song. Perhaps the song could be slowed down a little so that way she could be able to focus on her notes. Also, some percussion variation would be nice since it's the same loop continuously...

 

All in all, very nice and deep piece, but as far as beats and vocals, they could be tweaked.