FanFiction: Far Away (Incomplete)

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Hello my fellow bronies,

 

I have been working on a long novel recently, posted on FimFiction (link below) and I do not receive enough feedback. I really wish to improve this story, and my quality of content, and I cannot do it without your help! Feel free to PM me on FimFiction or just leave a comment on the story. Thank you guys so much. A short recap is also below.

Link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/343798/far-away 

Far Away: A brief introduction

This story is about a pony named Jackson, who finds himself in the desert (not telling how here) and nearly died of dehydration, yada yada yada. Pretty standard so far. He was saved by Daring, who finds him during some scouting of a jungle (don't ask how a jungle is right next to a desert. I don't know when I started writing this...). He gets nurtured back to health and basically, a war starts between Equestria and Griffins. Luna gets captured by some evil force, and all goes to anarchy.

 

This story is tagged with: Adventure, Mystery, Dark, Gore (Not much gore at all. Just tagging just in case.), Sad and Romance

Expected length after complete would be around 100,000 to 150,000 words. Currently at 63,000 words as of 21/11/2016.

 

-Sky