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Edited July 31, 2020 by NinjaSputnik
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[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Ok

It's an ok remix. However, that dubstep-type beat really staled out early. Plus, the shakey/zoom effects in the actual vid were unnecessary. Sadly, the overall feel of piece is sadly quite cheesy. The sped-up tempo and the repeated pattern blank out all possibilities you could do with this piece. Instead of those harsh solo sawtooths, maybe put a light solo squarewave lead at a certain point. Furthermore, less can be more sometimes. Take away the percussion and run some bright resonating plucked sawtooth or bright polysynth saws. 

All in all, this piece could use a huge overhaul. I suggest you try doing this piece again, this time thinking about you can take one idea and expand upon it, using different fills, transitions and experimentation with sound. I'm here if you need any help with understanding my critique. Shoot me a PM at anytime. 

[MC'01 47]

Nice remix, but it demands of mastering the voice audio and adding some extra pitch-changing things, like Alex S. or S3RL.