Royal Bond

[Ocean Melody 116]

This one was a fun one to make. I hope you guys enjoy. Criticism welcome. 

https://pony.fm/tracks/37467-royal-bond

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,824]

Ok

The greatest downside to this piece is it's organization. I see you had a steady tempo going, but you never really established a main theme that can keep your audiences listening. You began to scatter in many directions, which can make your audience lose track of what they are trying to visualize. You need to assign each section of the orchestra an aspect of the song, which is what I see lacking in this piece. You did have the flute as your lead, but I did not hear as much contribution from the other sections of the orchestra, which is what this piece could really use. 

All in all, unfortunately, this piece is gonna need a total redo. You need to learn how to organize your orchestral parts and establish a foundation for your audience to listen too. I'm always here if you need me. Shoot me PM at anytime and I can answer any questions you have.