Live action Equestria Girls scripts/stories. Need feedback/help

[Adagio Dazzle fan 10]

I'm working on writing scripts/stories for live action Equestria Girls. This is my dream job that came to me one night December 2015.

I know I need to ask Hasbro for permission to get this started. I'm not ready to ask for permission yet. Waiting for my offline helper to help me with the scripts/stories, my OCs, lyrics, and asking Hasbro for permission.

These are the scripts/stories I need feedback/help. The scripts are in story format because that's how my creative mind works. The scripts (just lines only) are a separate Google Docs. I only have a few songs thought of for lyric writing. None of the episodes are in order. I need to name a lot of the episodes to something better and name my movies.

Working on writing Rainbow Rocks with changing and adding stuff to help fit my timeline. Need to change all the Fall Formal and first movie mention to something else. My timeline is: Rainbow Rocks, first mystery movie, second mystery movie, Halloween movie (no script/story for this due to needing to figure out why Sapphire Midnight (OC) is the villain for the movie. Only have the script (lines only) for Halloween movie), Christmas movie (not much for the script/story), Concert mystery movie, Dazzlings only movie, and the show. The show needs a name and the very first episode.

Rainbow Rocks script/story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dSc2Hi5xSv43pzAVvnENgOzX7bFohyad6_tGRfdgKBo/edit?usp=drive_link

First mystery movie script/story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13JPQ-Ispxjx4Hf0Fbon7l-3DhVU4QQpIYWmls2kUfuA/edit?usp=drive_link

Second mystery movie script/story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zqQvk3YR66B1FVh4kKMmrCNQCg36XNWV9vR_sldxmug/edit?usp=drive_link

Christmas movie script/story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m4m5qF23-Qi8jbix3fCsUbn-IzZxg76Ouf7N0gtiuSM/edit?usp=drive_link

Concert mystery movie script/story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11qe6HK_ELaLj1lDReG-dja2IEOl-xbqCt--Vf3tBnj0/edit?usp=drive_link

Dazzlings only mystery movie script/story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bmoSOYRnX7L4jMeZZZZtUP5bwJCe-GPaXrZPCMYrxC8/edit?usp=drive_link

Seasons 1, 2, and 3 scripts/stories.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17zM72hNnWSW2fI_dlqi-RaSPeJ5KTJlXJ7xf39YoTVI/edit?usp=drive_link

Seasons 4, 5, and 6 scripts/stories.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DNLCGGHcDaVhiLI6qbHFICqYTO5Eo1bptFhjZEgv2IM/edit?usp=drive_link

Other episodes that don't have a season yet.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R8uwaAWlm8Gswi5cOZgv6w4FLxr7bvmnvAcE9CQNv70/edit?usp=drive_link

Music videos for movies.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JSu_HBRrBNB6Kh_qBi440y8e0TxJ0rYq5WXrr8K0UeI/edit?usp=drive_link

Music videos for seasons 1, 2, and 3.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ez3AmwwCpb4xonj5jF7QThZkLEbHSkqUUSM3aIrgMG4/edit?usp=drive_link

Music videos for seasons 4, 5, and 6

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1St8ayh11v8Rg7QOlK1gCF6Uoctrma4BS58Pr7YafsH0/edit?usp=drive_link

Music videos for other episodes.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bil8Uc1WEajjztDlsZupzI42hhw7VwclkF5E9vQmLDE/edit?usp=drive_link

Music videos for real world.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12SwI8vaKVW4VxlswlG1Ia725ehe3AQfuC2bfGT_GhvI/edit?usp=drive_link

I can post my OC stuff if anyone wants to help me with it. OC information and stuff, band/group stuff, and companies stuff. I can also post about the outfit ideas I have (I can't draw), merchandise ideas for real world concerts, lyrics, old songs book lyrics and what songs are about, party decorations, scavenger hunt lists, portals to the real world lists, items for movies and show, letters, notes, and information for episodes, Friendship Between Dazzlings and Rainbooms book (an OC is writing for an episode), gift baskets for movies, band tour bus information, advent calendars, amusement parks and carnival stuff, books information stuff, Dazzlings scrapbooks, information for mystery behind a picture, magic tricks lists for 2 of my OCs, pictures for OC's books (just a list), and Rainbow Rocks room (for Music Museum episode).