Story Idea: The Changeling that Changed

[Darkwand 0]

I just got a story idea about a changeling ending up in Ponyville.

 

I've only written the outlines of the story so far.

 

Is it a story worth writing?

 

 

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Flyttershy is out in the forrest around Ponyville when she goes to get Angels favourite food for her as she has a date with a male bunny. She had asked twilight to come and help her but she is too bussy she mention it when she is scared by a shadow in the forrest and which is twilight.

Twilight helps her collect her berries and comes with her home where they bump into twilight. The twilight of the woods is then revealed to be a changeling after pinkie pie has a number of tests to figure out who's who.

 

The changeling is as shy as fluttershy and the others are taken aback by it and warking Futtershy who takes pitty on it after it explains that she doesen't want to do bad things to ponys anymore and that kindness makes her thoughts dark and wicked. The other ponies try to co nvince fluttershy as she visit each one with the changeling as it displays abilities simmilar to the pony she's with all the wile the changeling is trying to convince her not to show her kindness as it will be dangerous but fluttershy won't hear of it. As they visit twilight she is semi reseptive but exhausted from magic training. Fluttershy then glances at the spell twilight is training and it's an eject spell similar to the one her brother used in a Cantelot wedding, twilight says she can only cast it right in front of her but fluttershy get's upset and runs off.

 

A changeling invasion of the city suddenly occors and a number of ponies in ponyville turns out to be changelings led by the crysalis. Fluttershy as scared as she is rushes into town to help her friends as she hears the screams as the changeling and her is at the forrest edge as the changeling wants to leave because Fluttershy has been so kind she don't want to be around when she ger's dark thoughts and turn evil again.

 

In town fighting the changelings the other ponies talk about how they knew this would happen and is critical of fluttershy. The crysalis is weakened after being ejected from cantelot and Twilight cant defeat her with spells fluttershy comes to the fight and manage to free twilight from a magic cage she was held in. Suddenly the Chrysalis appears ordering the changelings to gather around Fluttershy and Twilight and feed on their kindness.

 

Suddenly another Crysalis appears and the changelings get confused, the first Crysalis then turns into the changeling who had been with fluttershy and she yells at Fluttershy to use her spell on all the changelings including her as they are all in front of Twilight.

 

Twilight casts the spell and a very cross crysalis is flung away screaming not again but when the dust settles the one changeling is still there. Twilight explains that her spell only works on creatures with mallice in their hearts. The Changeling must still be kind somehow Zecora then appears and appear intigued at the Changeling. She explains that a changeling get's evil from ill gotten kindness that it tricks from other ponies but that true kindness is just as harmless to a changeling as a regular pony even though it's the energy sustaning a changeling but good kindness doesen't fade like ill gotten one does.

It all ends with a letter to princess celestia and and offer to the changeling to stay in ponyville, the changeling get's really happy turns into pinkie pie who is elated and they both scream let's celebrate with a party. The other ponies look on bemused and twilight says this might have some unexpected side effects.

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