Luna's Descent, Metal, WiP

[SonOfTheNorthe 412]

As a small number of you may recall, a few weeks ago, I asked the forums for pony lyrics.

Hazardous_Havard bravely answered the call.

And though he has given his input, I would like a few additional opinions on this.

Please give some constructive criticism.

(Or you can masturbate my ego by saying "OMG perfect 10/10 would fuck", but the former option would be preferable.)

 

(Note: The song is only about a third done. It's going to be longer.)

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Go47885k6M

[Lacey Shadows 164]

Hmmmm....I think if you fix the volume level of the vocals you'll be okay. Hope to hear the full version soon ^^