LF 2 People for Comic Storyline Consultation

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Although I probably will have to find a willing editor since I still have few problems when it come to the English grammar and the fact that I know the dialogues will be too dry without an additional help, that isn't too relevant right now considering that I see a 3~4 month of waiting period before I can call myself an artist who can at least draw 'something'.

 

But regardless, I've came to a realization that some kind of preliminary feedback on the comic's storyline is going to be essential if I hope to make a comic that actually is 'somewhat' refined.

 

So I am looking for couple individuals who are familiar with more 'mature' subjects than what the original MLP storyline is about and are willing to make a long drawn-out discussions about it. Bare in mind that this thing is going to have some elements that I think will be... 'disagreeable' with many bronies in the community. But I've decided that I want to launch this comic eventually because I need to do some kind of character experiment with a being that I've been developing for quite many years. Regardless.. the 'problematic' story elements is the following:

 

1. Matured discussion about ...life

2. Expanded universe

3. Main character is an alicorn OC

4. 0.01% violence factor

5. Duex Ex Machima problem (big concern of myself as well.)

 

Please PM me if you are interested, I've posted this some time ago but I came to a final decision that I am quite serious about this project.