FoxyCryptid 4,330 November 10, 2012 Share November 10, 2012 (edited) Wrote a short "cute" story to practice on emotional scenes, it's just over 1,000 words. I edited as best i could, so point them out if you see any errors I missed. http://www.fimfictio...comment/1589940 Edit: I apologize, now the self-grammar checked version is up. I'm bumping this thread since I posted it late last night. I just want to see I can get any views on it now since it's early in the day. Edited November 10, 2012 by Shoboni "You know, I don't know who or what you are Methos, and I know you don't want to hear this, but you did teach me something. You taught me that Life's about change, about learning to accept who you are, good or bad. And I thank you for that." -Duncan McLeod. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightRaider 148 November 15, 2012 Share November 15, 2012 Man, that was pretty good, awesome job! Most of your grammar and stuff was spot on! I'm going to be following you, and see what else you write. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxyCryptid 4,330 November 15, 2012 Author Share November 15, 2012 (edited) Man, that was pretty good, awesome job! Most of your grammar and stuff was spot on! I'm going to be following you, and see what else you write. Was that you that commented last? It looks like your account got deleted off the website. it give a "user does not exist" error when I click on you. Edited November 15, 2012 by Shoboni "You know, I don't know who or what you are Methos, and I know you don't want to hear this, but you did teach me something. You taught me that Life's about change, about learning to accept who you are, good or bad. And I thank you for that." -Duncan McLeod. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightRaider 148 November 15, 2012 Share November 15, 2012 Was that you that commented last? It looks like your account got deleted off the website. it give a "user does not exist" error when I click on you. Yeah, that was me. I screwed something up with my account, but it should be fixed now. It didn't get deleted, i just messed it up. (it was weird) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FoxyCryptid 4,330 November 15, 2012 Author Share November 15, 2012 Yeah, that was me. I screwed something up with my account, but it should be fixed now. It didn't get deleted, i just messed it up. (it was weird) You'll have to re-fave it then if you faved it, it deleted all but your comment and upvote when your account went. Just though I'd give you a heads up:) "You know, I don't know who or what you are Methos, and I know you don't want to hear this, but you did teach me something. You taught me that Life's about change, about learning to accept who you are, good or bad. And I thank you for that." -Duncan McLeod. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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