My club remix of fluttershy going mad

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Well I haven't made a song in over a year and I decided to start with a pony song. Now it took me 2 hours to put this little thing together. Keep in mind that it is not done quite yet and there is still work to be done (which I am doing now) I just wanted to upload something and get critiques.

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t71t8L-hhEE

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Could use more background instrumentals at the beginning to get a fuller sound overall.  Maybe something like a soft Ibanez chord, or maybe just really rapid Electric plucking.  Maybe an overall shorter song would be good, just getting in the good parts like at the middle of the song.  Or maybe if you had the ending of the song have some lyrics too.  What did you make this with anyway? I use MilkyTracker for all of my tunes, but maybe what you use is less complex.

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Could use more background instrumentals at the beginning to get a fuller sound overall.  Maybe something like a soft Ibanez chord, or maybe just really rapid Electric plucking.  Maybe an overall shorter song would be good, just getting in the good parts like at the middle of the song.  Or maybe if you had the ending of the song have some lyrics too.  What did you make this with anyway? I use MilkyTracker for all of my tunes, but maybe what you use is less complex.

I used Reasons and recycle for the samples. It sounds a little muddy to me, which I will be fixing in version 2. I did want to add more but I also wanted to semi finish it lol, in the second one I will likely add something else to it. I actually had a whole other group of instruments for this but I deleted them.