Could I bounce ideas for my TwiDash story off of anypony?

[Prof. Yana 16]

Okay, here's the situation: I have uploaded a story that I'm currently rewriting. It was only two chapters long at the time, so that's not really a problem. In the process of rewriting, I found I wasn't satisfied with the second chapter, so I want to change most of it.

 

I don't want to spoil it for any unsuspecting readers (it currently has 155 favorites on FiMFiction) so this will have to happen in PMs. I know it's unlikely that any readers will also happen upon this topic, but you can never be too careful.

 

Anyway, it's not standard fluffy TwiDash romance, it has other elements as well, which I will divulge further in PMs. I already have most of the story at large figured out, but no chapter specifics.

 

Heck, you could even be a proofreader if you please, the point is, I need some help.

 

I haven't uploaded the first chapter of the rewrite yet (it's still in pre-reading/editing), but I'll link you the old version if anyone asks.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to ask.