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Frosted Cake
                          Written by Frostbyte
Idea inspired by the worst fanfics out there
 
[WARNING] This fanfic Is WEIRD {/WARNING]
 
The Clouds were storm filled, the lightning crashed onto everypony as i just watched.
I knew and i wanted to gelp, but something just made me ... Careless.
"Frost!" a voice shouted to me, Sharply.
" What?" I said to Heatwave, Who was walking into the room.
 
"I wish we could help them, but i just cant  go down, i dont know why" She said.
 
I thought for a bit, "Im going out." i said bluntly.
 
"Im coming too, i dont care if it kills me, im going to save somepony." Said Heatwave, Softly.
 
I closed my eyes and flew out the door. " Close your eyes and fly out, you wont notice when your there or not so you arent trapped." i shouted to Heatwave.
 
We both got out alright, i thought, what now? "Frost!"
"Keep it together, We need to help Rainbow Dash and Fluttlershy with the foals."
"Your right, Lets do this." I said.
We went over to Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, "Frost! Heatwave! Your alive. We need help getting rid of fires and bursting these clouds." Said Rainbow.
 
"I will take care of the fires and save who i can. Heatwave, can you make a cloud thick enough for the ponies to stand on?"
"I will do what i can, Frost." Said Heatwave.
 
The lightning struck my tail as soon as i said that.
"OW!"
"What?"
"Lightning struck my tail"
"Hahaha"
"Im off to go save somepony"
"Okay Frost."
I swooped down and as i flew by the fires went out instantly. I was the element of ice, after all.
After i had put everpony i could find on the cloud, Something Flashed through Heavtwave, and she started to plummet. "HELP ME"
She screamed.
 
"Im coming to help!"
I caught her at the last minute, i noticed, her wings were bleeding badly. "Im getting you to the hospital in Canterlot!" i said, worriedly.
 
Once we got there, They rushed her in and noticed, her wing broke and the lightning peirced the bone. "Shes going to heal, but its going to take some time." Said Time Turner, Who had taken a job as a doctor. "Thank you, Can I go see her?"
"Yes, But not for long."
I went up to her room and went in.
"Frost! You saved my life..Thank you."
"I Got you somthing to help you stay sane in here,"
I held up A tuft of cloud and set it beside her.
"Thank you. Again."
" What are freinds for?"
"Goodbye, ill see you tomorrow"
I went out the door and tured off the light.
"Are you sure shes going to be okay?"
"Yes, we promise Heatwave will amke a full recovery, she may need some help though, she needs you to see her everyday."
"You bet, ill be here everyday after work."
I flew out the door and realized everypony was still on the cloud.
"Oops"
After everyone was on the ground, i went to go find the clouds that made the storm.
 
I found them, "They are ... enchanted with dark magic"
 
I decided i would take one to Twilight to see if she knew anything about it.
"These are more powerful then i have ever seen! You better take it to Celestia and Luna."
Said Twilight.
 
i made my way back to Canterlot to see Luna, because this would be the chance i had.
"I made some of these when i was Nightmare Moon, But i cant destroy them anymore, only extreme cold emitted from a pure pegasi can destroy them."
"Thanks Luna."
"Good luck on your quest. Tell Heatwave i wish her recovery."
"i will"
I went to go destroy the clouds, i started to push them all to a clump. When i was done i  Flew around them a few times, and they faded away. It was day now, and my workplace had closed until repairs could be made. "I better go see Heatwave." i said.
When i got there. Heatwave  waited for me at the door. "She wouldnt stay in bed, she wanted to go for a walk with you" Said the doctor.
"Hello Frost!"
"Hi Heatwave!"
"Lets go for a walk"
"Okay, Doctor can she wear her saddlebag?"
"Yes, Just keep her off the wing."
"Okay lets go!"
We decided to go to the park then see Rainbow Dash and the others.
"Frost?"
"Yeah?"
"I heard about what you did with the clouds, You saved Cloudsdale AND Ponyville."
"Can we not talk about it? I dont want it to go to my head."
"Okay, I understand."
We made it to Cloudsdale to see Rainbow Dash, i had to carry Heatwave there because of her wing, but some other pegasi helped out.
we found her shopping in the plaza still in her work uniform.
"Hello Frost! Hi Heatwave!"
She shouted out to us.
"Hello Rainbow!" Said Heatwave.
"Hi" I said.
"We Heard about how you save Heatwave and Cloudsdale, Those clouds here really annoying."
"Thanks"
"Are you okay Heatwave?" I said
"Im fine, im just getting to cold up here."
"Im sorry Rainbow, we gotta go, Heatwave is  cold."
"Okay guys, See you later."
"Bye"
We went ahead to go to see Fluttershy.
"Frost?"
"Yeah?"
"Your bleeding."
"Where?"
"Everywhere."
"We have to go back to the hospital.. now!" I said.
We got there, bu i was almost gone. "Heatwave, your freind Frost may not make it."
"This is an uncommon problem that happens when a pony is just to stressed about upcoming events."
"This is the first case ever recorded on a pegasus."
"Can you help her?"
" We will do what we can, in the meantime you should got back to your room so your wing can heal."
"Okay."
One Month later, I was okay.
I decided i would surprise Heatwave with a party.
I went over to Sugarcube Corner and found Pinkie Pie.
"Frost! Your okay!"
"Hello Pinkie, I came because i need help."
"Sure! What do you need?"
" I need you to throw Heatwave a party."
"Yay! Will do Frost!"
"Thanks, INvite everypony she knows."
"Okay! Bye Frost!"
Later, I talked to Pinkie and asked if the pary was ready. "Yep!"
I went to go Start Partying, Heatwave was asleep, so we all went in and turned on the light.
"SURPRISE PARTY!"
"Frost! Your okay!"
"You didnt think i would die THAT easily did you?"
"Wow! Everypony came over!"
" Of course we did, Heatwave, You ARE our best frend after all." i said.
" Heatwave?"
"Celestia? Luna?"
"Yes, It it us" Said the princesses.
"You came here just for me?"
"Everyone in Equestria cares about you Heatwave." I said.
" By the way, you can fly now." I said.
"Awesome!"
I suddenly woke up.
"It, was a dream?" i said
I still ahd wounds all over.
I looked at my heart monitor, I was about dead.
I watched as Heatwave walked in to see me. "Frost?"
"Yeah?"
"The doctor said you werent going to make it."
"Its okay, I just hope your okay, thats all i care about right now."
"Im sorry Frost, Im so sorry."
"Its not your fault, Heatwave."
" Im going to miss you."
" Likewise" I said.
I watched as my heart monitor Flatlined. I closed my eyes. I Had Died.
 
I Had a flashback, It was me and Heatwave as fillies, flying around, making cloudcastles, being happy. to think it ended tike that, its horrid. I woke up to the feeling of shock. 
"More Power!"
I got shocked again.
"More-"
"OKAY OKAY IM ALIVE STOP IT"
"Frost! Your alive!" "
"It hurt, but im alive...AGAIN."
"Are you okay?"
"I dont know"
"I Just... Really need some ice right now, im getting to warm in here"
"Nurse Redheart! Bring a wheelchair for Frost!"
Said Heatwave.
I got outside and flew up to Cloudsdale.
as soon as i got there, Rainboe Dash made a sonic rainboom she came to see me so fast.
"Frost! your alive!"
"You dont let me die do you?"
"Haha! im glad your okay."
Heatwave flew over  and nearly melted my face off at the speed she was going.
"Hi!"
"Hello!"
I Woke up again. I keep having hallucinations.
I was still at home. it was a normal day. it was all a dream. Heatwave come in and asked me if i had the same dream she had. we did. Derpy barged in and flew out the other window again.
THE END


Sorry about this doublepost, but i just needed to say Frostbyte is my Ponysona. So that is why I am Frost in the story.

 

Heatwave was a character i made before Frostbyte.

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