Fable III/MLP Crossover Fic

[Yes-Man 597]

I've been playing a lot of Fable III lately, and I decided to write a crossover Fic of it and MLP. May anyone provide ideas or anything?

 

Also, here's what I have so far, feel free to judge.

 

 

 

Foals, listen to this tale. A tale of love and betrayal, a tale of death and creation, a tale of war and peace.

We all know of the Elements of Harmony. The great 6 mares who defended Equestria time and time again. When Celestia died, she left her kingdom in the hands of her faithful student, Twilight Sparkle, still not trusting of her sister, Luna. In dismay, she the 5 bearers of the Elements in charge of several different departments.

With her best friends were benifiting Equestria, she turned her attention to spell-writing. Equestria was in peace.

But then, one fateful day, a colt discovered how to power machines and make thousands of items at once. Once the public heard of it, it was put into quick use. Rarity, the element of generosity and in charge of the economy, founded her own factory of this kind, naming it Carosel Industries. Soon, it became the most profitable buissness in Equestria. As they hit their millionth dress made, the Generosity Harmony necklace lost its glow. Rarity was changed by all this. She became a greedy and vile mare.

Soon, the same colt discovered weaponry so powerful that it could hit a Manticore from 20 feet away. The Equestrian military ate this up. Soon, crime and war diminished. But then, Rainbow Dash, element of Loyalty and general of the army, was challenged by a pony named Sharpshooter to a race over the title of General. Rainbow Dash almost won, but then Sharpshooter shot her in he wing. At the moment her wing felt the bullet, the Loyalty Harmony Necklace lost its color. When she hit the ground, she ran off towards Manehatten and was never seen again.