Pelate Overcast OC (edited)

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Name: Pelate Overcast

 

Race: Pegasus

 

Hair:Black/Red

 

Pelt:Light Gray

 

Personality: Serious, and Creative

 

 

Likes: drawing, anything creative, Pencils, traveling, and Sunlight (ironic right?)

 

cutie mark: Four pencils, with a star in the middle

 

Back story: born a normal Pegasus, in Cloudsdale, he attended flight school like the other kids, but dropped out at the age of 11, because he sucked and didn't want to do it anymore, and was given a hard time because he was a bad flier, so he ran away to Ponyville (on the balloon of coarse) and gave up on flying, for drawing, he felt more passionate for drawing, and stuck with it, and so he earned his cutie mark (described above).

later in his life, he attended ponyville's school with miss Cheerilee, along with mean Pegasus ponies who bullied time because he cant fly. but he never reacted to them, but all hes doing is bottling up his negative emotions and misery. at age 15(now) , he became more social but, is still carrying this heavy burden...

 

Please, Reply, Share, and scale it from 1/10

 

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4/10

The body and head are disproportionate, especially the head. It's too big for its body, and the snout isn't done correctly.

The body isn't as bad, but it's still incorrect. The neck shouldn't be a straight line-it should bend a little.

Well...thank you...i guess...though i didn't agree with a single thing, there, yes the neck is a little bad , but not THAT bad, i know its not perfect, but at least it looks alright. but i will edit the picture to see if i can change anything. and i have made the heads smaller...and it looked awful   don't take this as if i cant take criticism, but i think you where a little harsh, the snout has no problems, considering i have my own art style, its not sopposed to look like the show, its sopposed to have ta ponies look and not liik the same as the show. but i will change the neck and the head angles and size (maybe)

Edited May 21, 2013 by PelateOvercast

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>asks for criticism

>calls criticism harsh

Please. Use some grammar and spelling. This is a forum, not a text message

"My own art style" I love how people use this as an excuse to cover their flaws. Sure, call it that, but it's really only "your own" when there are huge differences setting it apart from the show. In this case, it's in style of the show with some errors.

It probably looks better with a small head. That head is just far too big for the neck. The head would be so heavy that the neck wouldn't be able to support it.

Also, please don't ask for critism if you can't take it. You will save yourself a lot of upsets.

um actually i can take criticism, but i don't like it when it isn't true and over exaggerated, its not an excuse, its how i draw, the head is just a little big,and i said ill see what i can do to 'satisfy' your taste

Edited May 21, 2013 by PelateOvercast