Story Help(Non-Pony)

[The Aqua Templar 0]

This Thread Isn't some “NEED ANIMATOR PLZ" Or “IS MAI CHARACTER A MARY SUE PLZ HELP ME" Thread, This is A Thread About my Story I'm Writing:

Nicknamed “Syra Adventure"

 

It's The story of A Post Civil War Universe, The World is mostly Populated By Syras(Elementally Mutated Humans), There are only 3 Billon Humans left, And 12 Billon syras, Currently It is on War 3, The Main characters are A Syra who hasn't discovered his powers(Named Derek), A Shadow-Syra Mix named Liccon, A Syra(Reveled to be human) Named Atlas, And A Human Rebel Named Eric,They are on Quest to Create a Unified World, Two Major Parties are at war: The UN Vs The Syra New World Order

 

Human Countries left:

Italy

Russia

Us(With 25 States)

England

Japan

 

What I need are some more characters, They May have Relationships with the main Characters, And Their story /Can/ Be inputted into The Storyline, The Other Characters are listed on the bottom, Anyways If you want to Put one of your Ocs In the Book, Follow these rules:

 

Alicorns Are Shadow Syras-1(Description At Way bottom)

Unicorns are Syras-2

And Earth Ponies are Human-3

Positions available are Thieves(Human/Syra), Human Soldiers, And A EveryMan/EverySyra

 

So Anyways Post Your Characters Below and Feel free to Suggest some plot lines!

~The Aqua Templar

 

 

 

 

Other Characters-

Elizabeth “Aqua": Insane Human, Loner, Has Short story is Connected to Plot.

William “Bill": Master Thief and Leader Of Thieves, Has Short story that is connected to plot

Winter: Adopted Daughter of Bill, Thief.

Light Da Firenze: Italian Mute Man.

Watcher: Shadow Syra.

 

 

 

-1Shadow Syras are Syras Engulfed fully by the dark energy That gives normal Syras Their power, Live in Shadow Realm, Can Jump Throw shadows(Liccon had this ability also)

 

-2Syras are Gifted with Powers via Dark Matter, They Each Posses their own Power, All Powers are different.

 

-3Humans Are Mostly Soldiers or posses some sort of firearm due to The Dangerous World they live in.

[Billy-Rex 54]

All you need are characters? Okay. This is my RP character:

Name: Alex Grey
Species: Earth Pony
Color: Light Grey
Manecolor: dark blond
Cutiemark: Staff of Esculap
Gender: Male
Occupation: Paramedic in the EMD (Equestrian Medical Division)

Alex is a normal Pony who does his job and helps everypony who asks for help. He has a leading role at work and his coworkers respect him. Alex leads the medical attendance group in the catastrophy defend unit, giving ponies in need food and a shelter with the unit's tents and carts. As he served in the Royal Guards he learnt how to use firearms, but sooner or later he decided to quit the job as it got too monotone.
Being the helping pony he is he tries to solve problems even though it may seem hopeless. But don't overstress his nerves or he may burst in anger which involves A LOT of shouting.

Alex is stubborn, not taking help when he actually needed it. Only in emergency situations, when he can't find a solution, he gives in and agrees to be helped.

 

I know it's a non pony story, but it's a character, right?