Help writing a mlp fan song

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So me and my friend wrote a song about the fan fiction "my little dashie" however, I don't think it's as good as it could be and would like someone who's lyrically talented to look over the lyrics just to see if they could help us. I don't want to release the song publicly on here yet, so if you could just maybe message me some sad song lyrics that YOU wrote I might let you help me edit the song. Sorry to kinda be a dick about it but I don't want to release the song till it's as good as it can possibly be