My story!

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So this is just a draft of my story called 'Rumors' Paragraph one

 

Rumors

 

     He suddenly woke up drenched in sweat, panting he wiped his forehead. Elevating hisself with his right hand he opened the screen of his laptop that was on a chair next to his 'bed' if you could call a blanket with a cushion under it a 'bed'. He turned on his computer and as he waited for his Windows freaking Vista to turn on he arranged his pillow by the wall so he could sit upright. Picking up his laptop he put it on his lap. After a few minutes of waiting he logged in, only to wait a few minutes for it to be ready to start. He sighed, "I HATE my computer..." He said outloud. He opened Google and then to youtube. As THAT loaded he thought of what he wanted to watch. He decided upon Bo Burnham knowing that a good laugh was what he needed. Clicking on the subscription 'Bo Burnham' he put on 'Words, Words, Words' and then to Ninjakiwi.com. After around 5 minutes of clicking around, and waiting for things to load he began to play Bloon Tower Defense 4. After 3 hours of gameplay that seemed to fly by his alarm rang loudly. He jumped slightly and got up to turn it off, leaving his laptop on the floor. After turning it off, he took his clothes up walked to the bathroom. Closing the door shut, and then locking it he turned on the water on it's coldest, bone chilling water. Stepping into it he shuddered "Be a man" He told hisself. Moving around to get all of his body wet, he began to get used to it. He stepped out of the running water and put shampoo onto his hand, after scrubbing his head for 30 seconds or so bubbles began to form. Stepping into the running water once more he scrubbed his head. Once he believed himself to have no more soap on hisself he stepped out of the shower and dried hisself with a shirt. He then put the shirt on, then his underwear, his sweater that was incredibly comfortable and had 'Brony' written on it. He then put on his red pants. Pushing the door open he walked out of the bathroom and grabbed his shoes with socks inside them. Sitting down he put on his socks and then shoes, his newshoes. Grabbing his backpack he walked out the door and then walked to his bus stop. Waiting for his bus to come, he opened his back pack and took out his iPod touch and played his favorite playlist of songs. Putting in his ear buds he began to listen to the music. Finally the bus came, he got on it and walked to the back of it and sat down. As he hid from anyone interaction he began to draw on his notepad.