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NEW FIC: The Adventures of two best friends.


Alleviate

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As you may have been able to tell, I have indeed started on this new fic: The Adventures of two best friends.

 

Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/69853/the-adventures-of-two-best-friends

 

Yeah, It's my first shot at a proper fic, with decent layout, style, and cuteness. Yup, cuteness, from me! ..I'm trying my best, but I've never written anything so nice and friendly before (No, seriously, usually someone gets killed, but no, not this time..)

 

 

I've already worked out what I'm doing for the next chapter, but any suggestions are welcome.

Could do with some useful feedback. Nice as it is; telling me to go to rehab for an 'adventuring addiction' is not that helpful, contrary to popular belief.

 

The next chapter will probably be out on Saturday or Sunday, after that I'll have a huge load of free time, so we can expect a few chapters over the Christmas holidays, (Mainly because we'll be going up to my Relative's place for a while, and he has no Wi-Fi, so I'll just take my Netbook and write!...)

 

Any suggestions, criticalness, cover-art ideas, questions, general randomness, Blueprints for the new secret weapons, etc. are welcome,

 

....I thought of something to say here, but I've forgotten now....

 

Thanks in advance for any help, etc.

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This story is pretty cool. I think I like it. However, I just need to say something. I don't recall anywhere in the fic what their mane and eye colors were. Correct me if I'm wrong, okay? I prefer to have a good mental picture (or an actual one) of what the characters really look like while reading a story.

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This story is pretty cool. I think I like it. However, I just need to say something. I don't recall anywhere in the fic what their mane and eye colors were.

 Alright, firstly, thanks! I was wondering what an unbiased reader would think. And secondly, yeah, I think I might have described Stormy, I think a small edit is in order...I agree, mental images of the characters are usually good. I'll work on that tomorrow afternoon when I've got time. 

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