ok so i made another horror fanfic.its longer and has more gore than the last one.enjoy!

its called the bloody killer

it was a nice day in ponyville,and fluttershy went off to go to rainbowdash's birthday party.Halfway along the way,she noticed a splatter of blood.She freaked out and ran to the party.She was the first one to arrive,cause she left a little early."hi fluttershy! said pinkie pie as fluttershy walked into the room.youre a little early,but do you wanna play with me and gummy before the other guests arrive?"fluttershy was still shocked at the sight of the blood."actually pinkie pie,i have something to tell you." "what is it, fluttershy?"asked the pinkie pie."well,on the way here,i saw something,like a blood splatter"fluttershys voice got quieter each word she said,but pinkie could still hear it."a blood splatter? maybe it was something else,like juice!"said pinkie pie."well,i guess you're right.ill play with you and gummy."said fluttershy."YAY!"pinkie pie shouted.then they went off to play with gummy.

Later on a dark red unicorn was trotting through ponyville,and noticed another pony that he hated alot.he walked up to the pegasus pony and asked her to follow him.she followed him into a dark room that had a shelf with knifes,each sharper and bloodier than the last.The dark red unicorn tackled the pegasus,and she got knocked out.She woke up tied to a metal lab table in the exact same room.She freaked out as she saw 4 other ponies tied up,too. one was an earth pony with a skin color similar to rainbowdashs skin.next was her brother,venus,and her sister,mercury.the last one was a white unicorn with a dark blue mane.The dark red unicorn walked into the room holding a decent sized knife.he walked over to the earth pony and said,"youre first."He jabbed the knife right through his cutie mark.He screamed as the unicorn started making huge gashes in his legs.blood splattered onto the other terrified ponies as he cut a circle in her stomach,and peeled off the skin,then findind the heart and cutting it open,causing the earth pony to die.The other 4 ponies were screaming and crying in fear.he turned to venus and said,"youre next."he picked up the knife and split open his stomach.Venus started crying in fear and pain.The murderer turned to mercury and said "while youre brother is bleeding to death,i'll kill you!"mercury screamed at the murderer,"WHO ARE YOU?! HOW DO YOU KNOW HE'S MY BROTHER?!the murder replied "my name is blood star,and i know everything."he went over to the first pony he killed,cut off his head,and started skinning it,ripping off the mane and removing the brain.blood star said to mercury "youre gonna have a headbutting contest."mercury looked confused,then blood star ran up to mercury and bashed the skull againist her skull as hard as he could.athe skull cracked open,and mercury screamed in pain.Blood star started to feel her head to find where the cracks in the skull were.then he cut open the head in the same place the cracks were,making mercury die.Then blood star looked at the last 2 ponies, then walked over to another table and picked up a ruler.he turned to the white unicorn and said "magic is useless" and sliced off her horn.She screamed in pain as he made a huge cut in her throat,making her die.Blood star turned to the pegasus and said,"youre my last murder for today!hahaha!"the pegasus was so scared,she screamed at blood star,"WHY ARE YOU KILLING US?!"

blood star ignored her and cut off her wings.he then shoved one of the wings down her throat,and she started to suffocate.While she suffocated,he picked up an even bloodier and sharper knife and used the ruler,jabbing her every inch of her body.Which too much blood lost and not being able to breathe,she died.Blood star picked up a piece of paper that show the ponies he was gonna murder next."next is bon bon,then applejack,twilight sparkle, and last that annoying little sweetie belle.FOR ME!!!"he shouted.Now the party was over and they were all happy,but tired."goodnight everypony!"said pinkie pie as she bounced to bed.Bon bon was at the party as well,and she was walking home when she noticed blood star acting like he was hurt."i need help"moaned blood star.bon bon noticed he looked really hurt and followed him to the same place the other 5 ponies got murdered.when they arrived,he smacked bon bon againist a table,causing her to faint.She woke up tied to the same table she got smacked on.Blood star was next to her, holding a knife soaked in blood and a thing that sucks up liquids."ok, i still need help.i need all your blood."blood star said in an evil way.he walked up to bon bon and slashed her arm,leaving a huge gash.he then used the liquid sucker and stuck it in the gash.He turned it on and the sucker sucked up all of bon bons blood.She screamed and started crying as the blood left her body,and making her die.Blood star turned off the blood sucker and starting writing a letter for his next victim;applejack.Then he attached it to a package and left the building to sweet apple acres and left the package outside.He trotted away and hid in the apple trees.He than saw applebloom come out and pick up the package."hey sis,you have a package!"said applebloom.applejack walked in and took the package from applebloom.she read the note then opened the package.When she opened it she fainted all of a sudden."hey sis, what happ-"then applebloom fell down.Blood star walked in the house and said "ooo a bonus.a little filly."Later applejack and applebloom woke up in a room tied to a very bloody lab table and noticed dead ponies on the floor.Then they noticed blood star standing next to them with his sharpest knife,as shiny as ever.he then said to them,"this is a brand new knife i bought just now and i can't wait to use it!youre first, filly."Applebloom shrieked and started crying.applejack was so scared and said to blood star."you can't kill a filly! please,just let her go! anything! you can kill me but please!just don't kill her!"blood star thought about it and said,"fine.But she can't tell anyone,or else i'll kill her no matter what."he untied appleblooms ropes and opened up the door.applebloom jumped up and ran away as fast as she could.Applejack was relieved that applebloom would'nt be killed.but then blood star picked up his knife and cut a circle around her cutie mark,then the other 1.he shouted at applejack,"ha! you are now a blank flank!"and threw the cutie marks across the room.applejack was now screaming and crying in fear and pain.Blood star used his knife and jabbed it through her back left hoof.Then he grabbed all of his knifes and jabbed them everywhere around her body,killing her.Next is twilight.later on that day twilight and spike were going to help applejack out on the farm.When they arrived,applejack was'nt there.Twilight thought she went inside the house and knocked on the door and applebloom answered,but she was still crying after what just happened to applejack.twilight asked "whats wrong applebloom?"applebloom replied,"applejack,*sniff* was *sniff*mur-m-murdered."Twilight gasped."really?! who murdered her?!"spike started to cry knowing that applejack was dead."who would want to kill applejack?"said spike.applebloom told them everything about the murderer and that she almost got killed.Twilight and spike quickly ran to tell the mayor about this.They got info about him,and found out his name;blood star.they all found blood stars house and quickly arrested him.he got mad and yelled at them,"WHO TOLD THE POLICE?! I'LL KILL WHOEVER DID THIS TO ME!!!!"he tried to use his magic to get away,but the police sliced off his horn before he could do anything,then they tied him to a very sturdy tree with chains."ok,you guys deal with him now"the police pony said to twilight and spike.spike asked twilight what they should with him.twilight said to spike that they were gonna write letters to rainbowdash,rarity, pinkie pie, and fluttershy.they did that,and they came as fast as they could and saw blood star tied to a tree. it was time; time to murder blood star.They started off having rainbowdash fly really high up and charge at him,causing him to get a ton of bruises and breaking his bones.next they filled pinkie pies party cannon with needles and shot it at him.needles got everywhere and into his eyes as well,causing a huge blood splatter.last they had twilight headbutt him and break open his skull.futtershy wouldnt dare do anything as she watch in horror as blood star got punished to death.last rarity picked up a sewing needle and ripped open his head,making him die.After that twilight ran to her house as fast as she could and found a spell that makes dead ponies alive again.she used it and make applejack,bon bon,and the other ponies alive again.they all walked gome,and applebloom was super happy to see applejack alive again.

-the end