Thunder Cleaver

Thunder was surprised by Rose's sudden assertiveness. He liked a pony that would keep him guessing . Though he could go without the gash in his cheek from when the vine striked him, but it wasn't bleeding much. "I thought it worked like the whole 'forbidden fruit' thing. You always want what you can't have, and if you can't have somepony, in theory, that would make them all the more desirable." Thunder really couldn't see the wrongdoings of his actions, but he knew he was hurting Rose and wanted to not do that again. He realized he cared for this pony, more than anypony else. He sat down and frowned. The only ponies he'd ever cared about were Minath and Soarin', and adding a new pony to this lest felt unusual. But it was different... He cared about her in a different way...

Sorry I've been gone for so long... I was having family issues. I'll post ASAP though, sorry I've been gone.

@, Thunder was browsing around Ponyville's market when something ran into him. He looked at it was Rose Marry, but he had to pretend to be inintersted in who ran into him. He pretended to not recognize her. "Hey... it's Rose... right" Thunder asked the mare, smiling as he did so.

"I would love to join your little parade pity party but..." The surprise of rejection on Minath's face was really funny. "I'm just kidding. I'll join you're little hookrah. You like this stallion, huh?" Minath pawed at the ground, clearly embarrased. That surely was a yes.

Thunder, still holding onto the branch, dropped himslf down so that way he was hanging upside down. "Why, hello Minath. Such a surprise." Thunder said, putting on his cockiest smile. "I had no idea you and Rose where here! What a coincidence!" Thunder said, feigning innocence.

Thunder, still watching Rose and Minath talk, noticed Minath's face light up. Why does it have to be so frustrating not hearing them?! Then, Thunder got an idea. He flew silently above where Rose and Minath were talking, then hid in a tree. He was surely in earshot now!

Thunder saw his friend Minath get up and go walk to Rose and Twilight. CRAP! Hopefully Minath would help him with the pretty mare, and not ruin his chances. Minath certainly would help him if he had told her about his crush on Rose, but he didn't. Thunder watched as Rose and Minath talked

"Yeah, I do too" muttered Thunder too himself. Maybe she'll be at the Parade and he'll 'accedentaly' run into, one thing was positive; he wanted to see her again soon. Maybe he'll come see her tommorow... or later today... but he vowed to see her again soon. He may not be the best at keeping promises, but this one he will defenetly keep. He headed into Ponyville and sat in at cupcake corner

"I would love one" Thunder said, giving a smile. "And I must agree with Celestia, these are wonderful, and you have every right to brag. Heck, I know I would" Thunder took his hoof and lifted up Rose's face to make eye contact. "That's better, now I can see your face."

"Is 'Rainbow Dash' the brother of the Wonderbolt Soarin'?" said Thunder, putting the cockiest of smiles on his face. "Is 'Rainbow Dash' named Wonderbolt Academy's best flier?" Rose Marry, what a wonderful name. Rose Marry... huh. "Can 'Rainbow Dash' do a sonic thunder?" hopefully Rose Marry wouldn't call out his bluff about the sonic thunder, but he wanted to impress her.

Thunder swerved and bobbed, shaping the clouds as he saw... a wonderful sight with a fragrant smell that nearly nocked him out of the sky. He gracefully landed in front of a wonderfully pretty unicorn with a blue coat, pink and purple mane, a rose cutie mark and the most delightful of freckles. "Hello ma'am, I'm the best flier around these parts, but you can call me Thunder Cleaver, Thunder for short"

Sure Storm. I'll add it in the group message soon. Most likely after this post but I need more letters but know I'm good.

Hey um, Could I join? http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thunder-cleaver-r2152 You siad you needed a colt but I'm trying to get in RP and I figure this woul.d be a good place to start...

Oh please nobody can deny they cried in pokemon that one scene where Ash kinda, like, died i guess and pikachu shed a little pikachu tear. NOBODY CAN DENY THIS! The manliest of tears have been shed

They are good, but alittle constructive critism... The eye porportions and their positioning is a tad bit off, and in some the noses look alittle strange. But overall good work!