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    Which fictional place would you take a 7 day vacation to?

    in General Discussion

    Well the obvious answer would be Equestria. Cause you know ponies and shiz. 

     

    My second option would be Onyx in the Halo universe:

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    Cause, according to the books, Halsey and the other Spartan 2's and 3's are there. 

     

    My other option would be Gielinor, the Runescape universe. 

     

    map.jpgTrain up to be the greatest adventurer of all time. Would be glorious. 

    • Brohoof 1

    Get your OC rated (temporarily closed due to overwhelming demand)

    in Original Character Help

    Whoops, sorry about that, must have slipped my mind.

    Design: Looks good overall,the mane is a welcome change from the usual patterns. The only gripes I have are that the hairline, in combination with the horn, makes it look like half her head is shaven, extending it downwards a bit could fix that. Also the blue eyes underline the already present similarities to Rarity, maybe change it to orange or amber. Cutiemark needs to be adjusted to fit the style. 7/10

    Backstory: Its serviceable and feels kinda canon. Specifying just what kind of cons she pulls would help. 6/10

    Overall: 6/10

     

    Design: A good design: Excellent colourscheme and good, if unoriginal, design. Are the stripes supposed to be warpaint or is he part zebra (would make for a good backstory). 7/10

    Backstory:  Yeeeeah, I don't like it. First and foremost: Its too long. The profile should give a brief, factual summary, if you want to include a written story, put it in a spoiler under "Other". As for the story itself: Ponies acting nothing like they would on the show, split personality without any real reason and a superpower. Canon this is not. 2/10

    Overall: 3/10

     

     

     

    Design: Very well done, tail looks like a cactus though. 8/10

    Backstory: Needs some serious editing: words missing all over the place. Also, he's always wanted to travel but didn't why? And how did he attend the gala without leaving Ponville?  The amnesia part seems unnecessary, since it doesn't influence the story at all. The necromancy part is a bit unclear (see complaint above), but maybe just replace it with something less dark, like Zecora helping him get in contact with his wife's spirit? 5/10

    Overall: 6/10

     

    Design: Interesting take on the mane/tail, but needs to be distributed on both sides of the head and somewhat simplified. Th the coatcolour is a bit too dark. 4/10

     

    The stripes are the cuts he's received. The backstory does need work on, however it is obviously gonna be non-canon. He is a main part of a fic I am writing about Anicent warriors. I'll link you if you like. 

    How Old Are You?

    in General Discussion

    20 and proud here. Still feels weird that there are a lot of users who are in a lower age bracket. Though this is just one of many forums, maybe all the other older members are hiding there?

    What is the poster above you known for?

    in Forum Games

    You have no idea who you are messing with my little friend.

    I have a fairly good idea. 

    Btw I'm making a fic which has Fluttershy transform into a legendary warrior of kindness, any ideas to what creature would represent her and kindness the best? I was thinking something like an eagle or a swan or something. 

     

    OT: Da boss.

    What is the poster above you known for?

    in Forum Games

    · Edited by ~Chaotic Parsley~

    Oh I do....intensely.....Intensely, intensely, intensely. Never say I don't, or I will hurt you biggrin.png

    Come at me bro. 

    I will love and tolerate the shit outta you. 

    As Fluttershy commands me to. 

     

    OT:

    Known for Breaking the laws of maths and dividing by zero 

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