The Ponyville Critic

Star splashed around a little, she watched Arcania write out the letter using magic.

Watching others perform magic had always been an interest of hers, so maybe if she could read books

like big ponies could, she'd be able to learn how to do more than just levitate objects.

"Adopt? She asked, as the water and various other things were poured into the bath. "What does adopt mean?" Star was curious, they soon filled up the tub. She tapped the water with her hoof, it was warm. She hopped into it, it was small, but big enough for a pony of her size.

Star grinned at Arcania, she was genuinely happy for the first time in a while, it felt nice.

Star walked over to where the two ponies Arcania gestured at were.
"Hi, my name is Star Gazer, can you help me?" Star Gazer asked the two with a smile.

"We absolutely can." The two said, almost in unison. "Follow us, please." Star turned to Arcania, all

these ponise were starting to make her a little anxious. "C-can you come with me, p-please?" She asked.

Sound of Silence: Disturbed

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u9Dg-g7t2l4

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"O-okay." She mumbled before going back to nibbling on the end of the scarf that Arcania had given her.

She hopped out of Arcania's grasp, "All of these ponies are so tall." Star thought to herself.

"Not to be rude or anything, but I think the little filly needs a bath..." Rarity winced.

Star giggled as Twilight tickled her.

"I tried to hide. I did some bad things." Star said. Remembering the things she had taken from other ponies, desperate to get food and to survive. "My mum told me it was wrong to take things that don't belong to me." She She added, a little disheartened. 

Star looked up at Arcania and over at the new ponies. She felt a little uncomfortable but she didn't want to insult this pony's kindness by being rude.
"H-hi, everypo, uh... everypony." Star said. "Wow, that was awkward, I hope nopony noticed that." She thought to herself.

If that isn't enough for the roleplay, then the other person can have the position. I don't mind.

*falls over and dies of heart attack*

Yes.

Anarchy or Democracy?

Being carried like this made her remember being carried by her parents, it made her feel happy and sad at the same time. She wondered if this is what it was like to see Ponyville from the persepective of a big pony. It was a really quaint-looking village.

Star Gazer's horn lit up, grabbing one end of the scarf and she started nibbling on it, she kept staring into Arcania's eyes, there was something about them that seemed kind, like with one look you'd be able to trust her.

"I like your eyes, miss Arcania." Star said, giggling again.

Star looked into Arcania's eyes.

"Arcania.... you're from Canterlot... I like that place, it looks pretty and shiny." She giggled. "I look at it every night before I go to sleep. I dreamed of living there, they wouldn't let somepony like me in to there though." She pouted.

She stepped back a little. She didn't seem unfriendly, but it's always good to be cautious.

"My name is... Star Gazer... I don't know where my mum and dad went." She said. "I came here from Manehatten, they abandoned me." A small tear formed at her eye, she closed her eyes and her head drooped to the ground.

She yelped and hid under her blanket. Looking up at the mare, she tip-toed over to the cake and sniffed it.
"Wh- who are you?" Star asked cautiously, this was the most conversation she'd had in the past month. She nibbled the cake slice, it was good... she tried to resist the urge to eat the thing whole.

The sound of a nearby train passing by startled Star Gazer, so much so that she fell in the river. Thankfully it was a warm day so she wasn't too cold when she got out. She shook herself off. Her stomach grumbled, it'd been a day or so since she'd last eaten anything. She was starting to get a little desperate.

Star Gazer woke up as she usually did, staring up at the brickwork on the underside of the bridge that she liked to call home, with only a stolen blanket to keep her warm during the cold nights. she stretched her legs and got up onto her hooves, she headed down to the river to have a drink. She let out a sigh.

Sure, that sounds like a plan.

Adoption? I'm sorry, I'm not quite sure what that means.

I don't really mind. I'd say just go with your instincts.

Okay, cool. My character is here: https://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/star-gazer-r2810

Just let me know if you want to go forward, if not that's fine too.

Not sure how to describe appearance, seeing as how I don't have a good idea of what the people in this world (ie elementalists) would wear. Armor, robes, etc.

As for the personality thing, let me give it a try:

Star Gazer (let me know if I need a new name and I'll think of one) is incredibly determined when given a task to complete, almost to the point of obsession. This can make it a little difficult for her to connect with anyone as she's often seen as a little closed-off and aggressive.

Not sure how else to describe her, I wanted to go into a bit of backstory but lack of knowledge about the world would make it wrong of me to make assumptions.

Are you looking for stallion characters or mare characters? Because if it is mares then I'm interested, I don't have any male OCs, you see.

That tune at the beginning of Eddsworld episodes.

Hey, don't know if you want me putting this in here, but yeah.

Name: Star Gazer
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Appearance: Character In Signature
Personality: Determined but Introverted
Weapon and spirit: Two Sai (Short three pronged blade.)

Just let me know if you intended for me to do something different. Thanks. ;P