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DarkLight

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  1. On the off chance that somepony still watches this post i finally have Chap 3 part 2 up...it took me forever to get it to look decent...
  2. I uploaded chapter 3 part 1. Chapter 3 will be a long chapter since there is a lot i wanted to fit in there but there had to be a break between them, thus 2 parts. Also when i type these up in Microsoft word i try to keep each chapter between 5-7 pages (size 12, times new roman, 1.5 spaced). Part 1 is 6.5 already
  3. So yeah...When i post a new chapter there is a good chance that i will take it down later to make tweeks...thats why chapter 2 is now down...please, when I post a new chapter can you give me feedback. I really need it if I want to improve my story. Im not sure if anyone is still interested in my story or is even still looking at my thread here, but in case there are. I made changes to chapter 2 and it is back up. Please give me some feedback, I could really use it and let me know if i made errors in the story, i try not to but i will fix them if they are pointed out.
  4. WOOPS...Ill be going back to fix that...now Im going to check the other names i may or may not have goofed on...thanks, i appreciate the feedback. I recently got back from a long trip and I was typing up chapter 2 the entire car trip. So it is up now. It's amazing how much you can type in a cramped car for 5-6 hours. Let me know what you think. I deleted the old outdated comments about my story. They were originally for my chapter 1 before I deleted it and made it a chapter1 vs 2.0 (lame computer term). I hope that others enjoy it, and i wish I could reset the likes and dislike thing in the corner of it.
  5. feel free. I've been told that where I posted my fic, that community can be a bit harsh if you make too many mistakes, or if it is disliked by many. you can look at the comments. The one that hit me the hardest was the one that said that it will hit the dislike abyss (i think thats what it was called) quickly. I remade chapter 1 after that. Im thinking of adding a password so only people/ponies from here can read it...But Im still unsure of that idea. If anyone reads this, please let me know what you think.
  6. Well...finally got Chapter 1 fixed...if there are grammer errors, Im sorry. let me know so I can fix them. workin on chapter 2. Also if you hate my story so farm I'll still love and tolerate you. What can I do, haters will always exist and I don't have any plans on trying to distroy all of them. here is the link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/116361/my-little-brony-adventure
  7. Well... I've been saying that I would post a fanfic soon. This is my first fanfic so I don't expect much, also i will try to release chapters asap. I hope you enjoy it. please leave feedback, either here or on my FIMFiction page. (hope this link works...) http://www.fimfiction.net/user/DarkLight_ Let me know if the story is able to be seen/read. Hope you all enjoy I done goofed...waiting for approval... I'll let you know when it is up and ready to read. I appologize again about the miss informanion...
  8. out of curiosity. If i submit the story, will i still be able to add chapters to it, or will it stop me from adding more? also will it change its status to complete or will i have to do that manualy? Im no english professor nor am I an english major but I know how to write. I try not to have errors. When I do I try to go and correct them asap.
  9. I just started writing a fan fic the other night and i have the first chapter done. I have no idea what the best way to post it is...can somepony help me please.
  10. You can have him as an alicorn. Mine will be. I like magic and I like flying, so why not have both. It doesn't matter what others really say, In the end it's your decision. Im currently writting a FanFic and if i can manage it ill be releasing the first chapter today, and besides a alicorn stallion is needed in the show if you ask me. Even if he is there for one episode just to confirm that there are male alicorns in the pony world.
  11. Or you could try Violet Sketch, I think that flows well...but that could be just me...
  12. DarkLight

    Um Hi

    mmmmmmmmmmm, apple cider delicious cider...forgot about that...
  13. let me one of the first to welcome you to the forum. Welcome and hope you enjoy the community. and cant wait to see your stuff.
  14. DarkLight

    Um Hi

    Welcome to the forums. Sorry im late. and sorry for finding your rum Thunder Knight; I was on the way to the helm of the ship when I found your rum... I was a bit thirsty...btw is there anymore rum?...Its gone.
  15. Well...the character that i planned on doing the fanfic on was exactly that...i based it off what i think I would look like/be if i was a pony. (not to say Im black but i think it looks good as a coat color). And as i said im stuck between the two, but im leaning toward the whisp more than the hexagon disign...
  16. Thanks everypony. When i start writing i plan on releasing them in chapters so i can get some posted. My profile pic; i created in minecraft. took me a while to get it to look as good as it did. I plan on finishing the rest of the body, but i can only build on it late at night... fortunitly i have MCedit, that helps with basic shapes and large filling of blank areas. On a different note...Im haveing a tough time desiding between two types of cutie marks to put on his flank when i get there...The two designs are a Whisp (ex. will'o'whisp) or a crystal hexagon...the hexagon will be explained in my fanfic. Just wanted to see what your opinion was. If you want i can explain they stand for (or atleast what they mean to me). Just let me know for my next post.
  17. Even if the Alicorn stallions arn't put in the show, could we assume that there are male alicorns either somewhere in Equestria or atleast somewhere outside of Equestria because Equestria is only a country and not the entire MLP world. They even mention that it is a country in season 2 episode 11 "A hearth's Warming Eve" or atleast they hint at it.
  18. Hello, Im DarkLight. Ive been a bronie for the past month now... I can blame/thank a youtuber by the name of K1ngCraft for it. I stumbled apon this forum while i was looking up whether or not there were male/stallion alicorns in MLP...or whether they existed in that universe... I plan on writting about a character I just happened to dream up while i was day-dreaming one day, and I couldn't stop adding to his adventure... I plan on trying to draw him at some point in the future...along with a few other things. -Sorry this is so long... I will have to find private time to do all of these things as my family and friends don't yet (hopefully never) know that Im a bronie...One of my friends knows because he told me that facebook and youtube were connected and I didn't know at the time...so only one of my two brothers know (he wont tell) and that friend (who is awsome). I live in America, and am 21 years old. I try to help everyone I can, and ask for little to nothing in return (to a fault, I usually put others before myself)...I enjoy to see other people/ponies happy. I accept everyone for who they are, and only judge one's character by thier actions (actions speek louder than words). I may be an intimidating guy in person but Im a big softy. Anyway...sorry it was so long; If you read the whole thing; thank you for your time. If you would like I can post my Fan fic for you to read (when I finish part of it. Ill be starting it soon.), and ill post the pics I make when I get around to making them. -Until then DarkLight signing off High hoof /)(\
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